Please don't burn me at the stake...!

[NeoMikey]

Well, one day I got an idea that wouldn't leave me alone, so I typed it out. The only problem is that it could potentially incite an angry mob and cause folks to scream "Why won't you let it die?!" But still...I'd like to hear you folks' opinion about this. And cookies and Mountain Dew for all who don't try to kill me!

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Link to the story!

Edit: It was on a different webspace before, but being that that one wasn't doing well, I moved it to this other one. And it, sadly, was done in Wordpad, so while it's not the most "professionally done" out there, it should work for everybody. =)

[madphilb]

Got a "not found" when I tried to link it (may be that it's being iffy now).... but I would suggest that you dump it to HTML or something first, not everyone can read DOC files (esp. if you've used word and not WordPad).

[NeoMikey]

I corrected it. Should be okay now.

[ShiroiHikari]

^_____^; I knew something was up when they said "someone set up a bomb!" Very interesting ^^;

[Hitokiri]

::grabs nearest pitch fork and torch::

Who wants to start a riot with me!!!



kidding, intresting story. I can't pass up Mountain Dew and cookies

[Psycho Ann]

You know, that was actually quite good! Lol, I always wondered what would happen if All Your Base was taken 'seriously'. Very, very, nice writing, I love the details you put into the descriptions. Especially in the beginning ^^

[Straylight]

That was pretty sweet, I didn't really expect anyone to come up with fanfiction for THAT, lol.

[Zilch]

(grabs pitchfork and torch) Let's delete him!

that was great!

[Da Rabid Duckie]

Oh man, that was great. I have to admit though, some of the spots made me think of the game itself and I couldn't help but crack up at the serious attempt being made. Still though, it sounds like the story that should have been in the manual to Zero Wing. Nice job.