Tonight, Tonight

[Yeshua-Knight]

this is a short story that i've broken up into parts and i'll be posting a part every so often and for the record yes it is already finished, but i still have to put it into the computer

Tonight, Tonight (Part 1)

“NO!! I REFUSE TO LET YOU DO THIS ALONE!!â€

[Esoteric]

An interesting start. I have some thoughts, but I'll hold off on comments until I've read a little more.