Reality

[Phantom_Sorano]

I was lying on my bed looking out the window when this poem popped in my head. I scribbled it down on paper rather quickly unsure of how it really sounds. Please give your opinion. ^^ Thanks!

Reality

The grass is blue
and the sky is green
the sunlight shadows
and the darkness gleams
the heavens are fearful
as the mountains roar
the doors are windows
and the ceilings are floors

The earth brings rain
that make the skies flood
rust turns to steal
and gold becomes mud
planes roam the land
and boats cruise the clouds
the lion's cry is meek
and the cricket's chirp is loud
the dogs meow
and the cats bark
up is down
and light is dark

Although this idea
is strange for you and me
This world for others
is reality

[Gelka]

I like it. I flows well and it's fun to read out loud.

[Phantom_Sorano]

Thank you!!! I thought it was bad because no one had replied. lol