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My next story

Postby Sesshoumaru » Tue Jan 25, 2005 1:20 pm

This is just the prologue to my latest story


Tell me what you think


Andrew Jackson was a normal teenage boy. He hung out with friends, had a family and generally ha d a good life. But one night he and four friends were taking a drive real late at night. After passing by a ravine they car swerved off of the road and crashed into the woods below. A strange shape had ran infront of the car as it made a trun. What was it?? or who had it been?? Andrew and his friends crawled out of the car unharmed but startled. A dark figure loomed over them and let out a a depp ear piercing,blood curdling roar and attacked them. They tried to run but they were all savagly mutilated. The next morning Andrew awoke safely in his bedroom. What had happened?? ahd he and his buddies not been attacked by some savage monster?? was it a dream? he met up with his friends and they recall the same event. Get ready for a tale of murder,lusts and carnage as Andrew struggles with the facvt he has been cursed and is slowly transformin into a horrible beast


What do you think??
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Postby Esoteric » Tue Jan 25, 2005 3:03 pm

Ummmm, scary. *inches away from Andrew Jackson*. Kinda like a 50's B-movie plot.

BTW, you might want to change the name...unless you intend for people to think of the 7th president of the United States. ^_^
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Postby Sesshoumaru » Tue Jan 25, 2005 4:09 pm

Thank you. Nah I'll keep the name ;)
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