10 haikus

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10 haikus

Postby Mr. SmartyPants » Mon Mar 21, 2005 5:31 pm

written them for homework... i especially like the last one

try to figure out the subject of each haiku. What is being written? (some are harder than others)

Silent the night is
A pin drops on a cold slate
Doesn't make a sound.

Pattering softly
Tickling the roof shingles
Fluid down the drain.

From soft to extreme
Slashes across and around
Blowing at your face.

Crisp leaves on the ground
Green transitioning to brown
Suddenly gets cool.

No cricket chirps now
Not one thing is living now
What night truly is.

Peeks around tall grass
Only seen before your death
The lion eats you.

Strings are vibrating
A irregular baton,
swirling correctly.

Ivory keys pattered
Graceful like a warm ballet,
Not one error played.

Immorality
Inside each and every boy
Except for one boy.

Of the intellect
Because of their boastfulness
They lack true wisdom.
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Postby Linksquest » Mon Mar 21, 2005 5:35 pm

hahah! Awsomeness... but there still remains an invisble, thin thread
strung inbetween all of them connecting them all in a very remote way.
i think they have a vague connection that makes them flow... no matter
what you may say! n_n

i didn't know you had it in ya ryan!

Awsomness!

now i dont expect any less of you... WRITE WRITE WRITE!

Write well.. and write often!
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Postby Mr. SmartyPants » Mon Mar 21, 2005 5:36 pm

copy/paster...
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Postby Linksquest » Mon Mar 21, 2005 5:37 pm

Mr. SmartyPants wrote:copy/paster...


you knows it!
DO YOU FLY FOR FUN?!

I give props to these ANIMEs/MANGAs: GRAVE OF THE FIREFLIES, AZUMANGA DAIOH, MONSTER, SAILOR MOON SERIES, AKAGE NO ANNE, BOTTLE FAIRY, MY NEIGHBOR TOTORO, HOWL'S MOVING CASTLE, PARANOIA AGENT, YAKITATE!! JAPAN, UTAWARERUMONO, KANON, FULL MOON WO SAGASHITE, & YOTSUBA&!

LINKSQUEST's PASSIONS are: READING (especially books by authors: Lois Lowry, L.M. Montgomery, Ray Bradbury, C.S. Lewis) WRITING, SINGING, ACTING, COMPOSING, PIANO, PHOTOGRAPHY, ART, COOKING, MYST series, ZELDA series,OLD TIME RADIO , New Time Radio, SPANISH, LANGUAGES, and the list goes on.
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Postby Locke » Mon Mar 21, 2005 7:26 pm

Again with the blatant advertisment Ryan? =]
Weres the HL2 haikus?

So do ya want that "Human/Azn Pride" sig now?

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