MSP's Writings!

[Mr. SmartyPants]

this thread is about my own writings! read them and comment on them!

Nature is its own orchestra

Nature is its own orchestra.
A free orchestra.
It has no limits.

What goes, goes.
It cannot be stopped.
Nor does it ever repeat twice.

Small birds, flying, chirping
Each has it's own sound.
Never twice alike.

Rabbits, prancing around
Finding it's food.
Minding itself.

The trees standing in place.
Yet constantly in motion,
The wind plays the trees.

Leaves, always rattling,
Never remaining still
Sometimes falling.

The wind, always different.
Either soft as powder.
Or strong like a battering ram.

The owl, always alone.
And it's isolated howl.
Sends a depressing feeling across.

Each and every sound
When Separated, sound natural,
Sounds like nothing special.

But all together as one.
It forms the most beautiful
Elegant musical piece ever.

It's odd
It doesn't seem to make any sense...
But it really does make more sense than one could imagine.

[Mr. SmartyPants]

Isolated Cavern

Leading myself outside the two doors of freedom
Leading into the brightness of a frigid winter afternoon
Brushing off my foul navy blazer
And my tie clamping my neck apart
I rummaged my shoe into the remanents of a days snowfall
and I formed a perfect cavern of powder
like a rabbit's hole, who only popped out his head
to see what was out in the light.
A sudden feeling of isolation engulfed me
An odd feeling that I remembered
Like a walk inside a busy city street
that was mysteriously deserted
I imagined myself as that little critter,
chittering it's teeth, plucking it's hair
Scampering its way back into it's hole,
away from this metro area.

[Mr. SmartyPants]

Transparent Freckles

Small Jewels on the Window
Racing down the glass panels
Some are marathon runners,
Others are elderly men with canes.
I want to feel those liquid beads,
So I put my hand on the sandy ice
But they continued to slip by

Why is this?
Why can I not touch the cool drops?
What kind of sin did I commit for this to occur?
Then it dawned upon me...
I was on the opposide of them.

[Mr. SmartyPants]

They Play

They awaken
They cry
They eat
They giggle
They play

They awaken
They run
They shout
They laugh
They play

They awaken
They chat
They party
They drink
They play

They awaken
They threaten
They terrorize
They kill
They play

[Linksquest]

TRASPARENT FRECKLES: hahaha! For some reason i find that hilarious. You worked the process very well showing your frustration and anguish thinking you had done something wrong... and then you were just on the opposite side. im sorry... i just find that amusing.

THEY PLAY: It's very MONSTERish. I was reminded of Johan when reading that... SCARY O_O!

ISOLATED CAVERN: The description and Metaphores were.... how... did you do

that! I didnt know you had it in ya ryan! That srsly was awsome!

NATURE IS ITS OWN ORCHESTRA: I really liked this one!

[Mr. SmartyPants]

Breathe

Watching their life speed by
Living their lives to the fullest potential
Lifeless Beings
They dance nonstop
They drink nonstop
They party nonstop
That's all they do
“Carpe Diem!â€

[Mr. SmartyPants]

I want to see you laugh
I want to see you cry.

I want to see you smile
I want to see you frown.

I want to smell your fragrance.
I want to hear your mouth.

I want to understand you
I want you to understand me.

I want to hold you close
I want to feel your warmth.

I want to say "I truly love you"
I want to hear you say that to me too.

But I will never be able to
Because you do not exist

Never have existed
And never will exist.