Aldean Chronicles - New Episode, Episode 20

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Aldean Chronicles - New Episode, Episode 20

Postby starwarsboy90 » Mon May 02, 2005 9:13 pm

Hey everyone, here's the latest Episode that is out, Episode 20. Read and enjoy, give some feedback please!
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Postby Magekind » Fri May 06, 2005 3:29 pm

You'll forgive me for not taking the time to read it completely through... It looks a bit flat, but still interesting considering not much happens.
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Postby starwarsboy90 » Sat May 07, 2005 10:17 pm

yeah, alot of things happen and the story line constantly changes. So much more so that I can't see all of it as a picture.
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