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Postby faithfighter » Fri Jun 10, 2005 10:47 am

Why do I feel like this when ever we part?
Tears stung my eyes when I watched you go.
The time passes slowly as I await you return.
Why do I feel this way when you are not here?
I miss your kind words that always filled me with hope.
I miss you…but you are gone…
Will you think of me while you are gone?
Will you miss me at all?
It hurts to think maybe you won’t.
It hurts to think of that,
Why do you make me feel like this?
Why do I miss you so much?
Even though we haven’t known each other long I feel like I have known you forever….
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Again it comes over me.
I don’t understand,
Depression and anger posses me.
I need help. Get me out,
Before the storm overtakes me.
I dislike the feelings yet embrace them.
I can’t get away.
Please help me get out,
Why do I feel like this?
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[color="Green"][font="Verdana"]There is no one you can't love once you know their story-Mary Lou Lawnacki[/font][/color]
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Postby Otaku10 » Fri Jun 10, 2005 10:51 am

What a touching poems. Awesome work. :thumb: This could be a lyrics for a greatest hits song!
Character cannot be developed in ease and quiet. Only through experience of trial and suffering can the soul be strengthened, ambition inspired, and success achieved. - Hellen Keller

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Postby faithfighter » Fri Jun 10, 2005 10:56 am

Wow you like them that much...thanks that is so kewl of you.
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