CR' writes poetry...

[ChristianKitsune]

I wrote these for my friends...no one in particular...just all my friends in general..

When you are hurt

When you prick your finger. When you fall down.
I will always be there...to lift you up.
When your dreams fall through. When you don’t want to go on
I will always be there...to wake you.
When you decide that it’s too hard. When you don’t see the point
I will be there...to show you the way.

Lift up

I feel your pain. I know of your sorrows.
And though I may not understand.
I want to be there, like a light in the darkness.
Like an umbrella in the most torrential days,
I want to be there.
Let me be your life boat, let me lead you back to happiness.
In the coldest days in the harshest days I want to protect you.
To lift you up above the clouds like a balloon.
I feel your pain. I know of your sorrows.
And though I may not understand.
I want to be there, like a light in the darkness.
Because...that’s what friends are for...

[KBMaster]

Very nice poem.

[creed4]

Good Job, keep up the work

[Linksquest]

*gives CR a hug* Great work!

I Especially liked these parts of the poems:

I will always be there...to wake you.

I want to be there, like a light in the darkness.

Keep it up!

[Sakura15]

Great Job Oneechan!! I love them! ^^

[ChristianKitsune]

WOW thanks everyone!!!

[Jingo Jaden]

Loved it CR.

You can both draw and do poetry. You are really something you know that.

[faithfighter]

awesome peoms Oneechan...you are such a loyal and wonderful friend!! *glomps*

[Anna Mae]

You express very nice sentiments. I would make one note. In the parts of the first one such as
When you prick your finger. When you fall down.
I will always be there...to lift you up.
I would suggest that you change the first two periods to commas to make it flow better.