Trade Messiah

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Trade Messiah

Postby 4m3r1c4 » Fri Apr 28, 2006 6:44 am

The world, as dark as it was, could not and did not want to endure the tyranous hell that enveloped its surface. So then it grew a new form. But to form again from old it had to pass through fire and Ice to successfully transparalyze.
finally it achieved its purpose and began to shrink very much in the same way the sun did wane and became as a small grain of sand in the vastness of space.

Parading spitefully, the inhabitants of this sailing masterpiece mauraded and destroyed the very essence of their natural selves.
The things they needed most to survive was now gone. The sky turned dark and the air turned and became now a thunderous tumolt. One by one the pillars of humanity's hope were dismissed in their thoughts as ruinous deceptions. By their thoughts they were dying. Killing themselves mentally and physically the human race was almost completely desimated..save only a band called tadehskn. These were not the ones who were thought of to be the ones to survive. Before everyone would despise them, if only they could see the spirits..
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Postby Zarn Ishtare » Fri Apr 28, 2006 6:58 am

So, did you want to explain that one, O cryptic prophet, or did you just want to leave that dramatic lag there for us to wonder?


*Watches this get moved to Writing or somewhere more appropriate for this sort of thing*
With your doubt, all is comfort
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
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Postby holysoldier5000 » Fri Apr 28, 2006 7:06 am

... and that's why we invented aluminum foil hats! The day is saved! HOORAY!
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Postby 4m3r1c4 » Fri Apr 28, 2006 7:09 am

just wanted to share a bit of a new story
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Postby holysoldier5000 » Fri Apr 28, 2006 7:14 am

4m3r1c4 wrote:just wanted to share a bit of a new story


It's cool. But you posted it in the wrong place. All stories go in the writing section. But don't worry about it. Awesome stuff though!
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Postby Stephen » Fri Apr 28, 2006 10:55 am

Moved to the writing board.
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again...before

Postby 4m3r1c4 » Thu Oct 12, 2006 9:35 am

Chapter 1 the futile man of trade messiah +tale of revenge+



Season +beginning+ [the echo of your search]

1.On the innocence plains ran a young boy from what he believed to be a band of murderers. The ones his grandmother used to talk about and recount stories of times before when things were different. Different like de-javu, when things happened at random.

2.Now the people, who were about a mile away, from the tiny village at the end of the plains, were a fearsome people and instilled suffering.

Wait....that’s not right...that’s not how it goes at all! Let me tell you how it really was and still is...



As I looked on the fusion tanks the words still behaved erratically jumping in my sight back and forth weaving in and out of the labels and oozing all over the place. I didn’t know what was going on. The fuel I was infused with wasn’t working, so I thought, but then I realized if I kept breathing, I would surely develop into another. I know you don’t know what’s happening with me but it’s only because you don’t live in the world I know. This dimension, as you may now acknowledge, is rather immense. In fact it is different a reality, if it is reality at all, because it is not really a reality in the sense that reality here is not real in your reality. Thinking is not considered the correspondence of thought between mind and action but rather to think is the opinion of the sphere of around the action to the perception of the outcome of the thought process.

Now for on with the explaining and less with thinking about what’s going on because I do not speak well in your language.

+the kill and tank+



The fission reactors were on my mind and as I always do when I prepare for any going out, the phone rings. This time as I picked up the lights went out around me and I heard a frequency shock that went through all of me. I fell above and staid in the air suspended until my reserve energy restarted me.

It’s a dramatic scene if maybe you are still an innocent. That’s where the dream takes place. In this place dreams and thoughts are like reali life in your world. This general idea, then, is set and you understand now. The teasing of the air made my spirit angry and I reacted indifferently and spent the afternoon breathing it all in. the transformation, I would later notice, became a quite efficient scheme to bring my surrender to the ruling power: sdk9.

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