Felix's Writing

[Danyasaur]

OMGosh FELIX! THAT'S FLIPPIN' AWESOME! XD *glomps* I love it!!!!

[Felix]

Aww, you called me Felix, X3
Thanks guys! ^^ *hugs*

[christianfriend]

o.o...*is stunned*WOW! Ohmegosh! thats so good *takle-glomps*

[Felix]

*tackle-glomped of love* ^-^ Err...thanks! Glad you like it!

[insanewitapen]

AHH SO goood! *hugs* I luv it Dan~ you have such a talent for writing these things *__*

[Josh Fisher]

AWESOME AGAIN, you have a real nack for this

[Felix]

You guys are too kind. It's really nothing. Thanks though. ^^ Encouragment is great!

[Felix]

A little thing I scribbled down when I was feeling kind of depressed earlier today. Writing helps me to get out my feelings, I feel much better now ^_^


Silent as the softest snow, comes winter's coldest chill,

Ripping down the careful walls, I've built around my will,

Backwards thawing, sawing through the notions that I keep,

Of hugs and loves and happiness, a kiss before I sleep.

I thought I had it in my hands, my life was in control,

But now my love is in reverse, it's eating at my soul,

I used to trust, to kill my lust, for carnal things I craved,

But trust is dead, and lust is fed, yet still I hunger more...

[Sakura15]

Thats a sad, but very well written poem ^^ And I'm glad your feeling better

[Josh Fisher]

WOW that is so how I feel right now Felix, *Crys*

[Felix]

*hands you a hankie* I'm sorry to hear it, I'll be praying for you. I tried my hardest to focus on what I have that's good, and I found that there is a lot more than I thought there was. It's no fun to be a moper ^^;

[christianfriend]

I've been feeling kinda sad lately too..I just realy miss Christiangirl..we always spent the night at each others houses every weekend..but we can't do that now since shes in China. So im lonley on the weekends..REALY lonely...T_T

[Josh Fisher]

*sits outside Libby's window* hiya Libster I am outside lol not really but wouldnt that be freaky

[Felix]

*snipes Josh* Sitting outside people's windows is weiiiiird.... ahaha, jk, well it is, but... ahh nevermind.

Aww, I don't want you to be saaad. You should buy some pink pants and wear them around. That always cheers ME up!

[christianfriend]

Lol! ^-^ im happy now because Christiangirl is coming back from China soon!

[Felix]

Erm....I wrote this when I was depressed <.< Fear the lame cheesy drama.

Once again, there’s no pain
While I’m numbing my transgressions
And my scars become scars
But I owe me one confession
As I drop down once again
Upon my dirty knees
Just asking for an end
To end this endless torture
Put some salt on my wound, I don’t care
I’m already in pieces
And there’s no life to spare
I need pain,
As there’s nothing else to gain,
I need let my heart be slain
Once again

[creed4]

It is sad. I see repentence in the poem. It good keep it up.

This is me but Like to go into redemption as well.

[Felix]

Finally, an update! I wanted to write something, you know, wintery, since it is sorta winter an all now.

Hibernation

The leaves are all falling
The fall is through stalling
And winter is on its way

The tops of the trees
All bend in the breeze
Singing along as they sway

The dewdrops are freezing
While storm clouds are sneezing
And snowflakes come out to play

So eat with a reason
And sleep through the season
Then open your eyes in May.

[Photosoph]

That's so cool! It has that 'snow-falling, bells-ringing' in the background type of feel. Also reminds me of the sort of poems in the Redwall series by B. Jacques. Very cool, Felix! ^_^

[Felix]

^_^ Thanks, Soph! That's kinda the feeling I was going for, so I'm glad you like it!

[christianfriend]

^_^ That's so awsome Danny! I realy love the whole flow of the poem, it makes me think of a snowy Christmas Day ^-^ great job! *glomps*

[Photosoph]

Well I could seriously picture the whole Christmas feel when I read it. So be encouraged! I love all your writing; continue it, please, because you've got real talent there.
And hi, CF! Wow, I came to this page on this thread, quickly reread the former page, and when I clicked back here you'd just posted!
Heh, I just find that sort of thing cool. Makes the post-system seem less static. ^^

[Felix]

^_^ That's so awsome Danny! I realy love the whole flow of the poem, it makes me think of a snowy Christmas Day ^-^ great job! *glomps*

*glomp* Thanks!! ^_^

[quote]Well I could seriously picture the whole Christmas feel when I read it. So be encouraged! I love all your writing]
Thank you much! I'm really glad you like what I write ^_^ I really really love all your writings as well.
Unfortunately I'm not a particularly consistent writer, which is most likely why I didn't get very far in Nano Wrimo. ^^;

[Photosoph]

No matter. I generally have starts and spurts of writing; sometimes I write a lot, other times I abandon writing for a while and do something else. Besides, a novel doesn't have to be written all in one sitting. ~_^
I'm glad you like my writing too! ^_^

[SnoringFrog]

I just finished giong through these 9 pages. I didn't actually fully read everything, but I read the majority of what you have here. Amazing work.

"Fake life won't fill a God-shaped hole." My favorite line from the whole thread, I loved it. Absolutely loved it.

Teddy Bear Ballad was amazing as well.

[Felix]

Wow, thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it all ^_^ Thanks for your encouraging feedback!

[Danyasaur]

Dancakes. I have to say. I've been reading through this again, and you are the CHEESE at writing, man! I love all your stuff; It has this awesome tempo to it, which is what alot of my writing lacks. ROCK ON! >0</ *glomple*

- Pooky

[Felix]

*hugs* Thanks Pooky! ^^ That means a lot.


-Here I am again-

Here I am again, my Dear;
I’m sailing on a sea of tears..

Here I am again, my Love;
I’m dancing on the wings of doves..

Here I am again, my Sweet;
I’m skirting clouds with feathered feet..

Here I am again, my Flame;
I’m bridling what can’t be tamed..

Here I am again, my Dream;
I’m riding home on silver wings..

Here I am again, my All;
I’m answering the secret call..

[Felix]

Okay, here's another I just wrote up. It's really dark *flinch* But oh well. I seem to be able to write dark stuff better ^^; Huh.... Oh well, hope you like it.

-Funeral for Lullaby-

Rock-a-bye baby, under a rock
Hidden away from old Father Clock
When the ground breaks, the baby will cry
An arm for an arm and an eye for an eye
So sheer all your sheep and say your goodbyes
With bitter repugnance and little white lies
We’re going to grandma’s to sell her our souls
And turn in our paycheck of blank porridge bowls
Now gather your bricks and your sticks and your straw
Your welcome is void and it comes to a draw
So ladies and gentlemen, don your wolf clothes
And please face the moon now in neat filed rows
The woodsman is coming with hardly a sound
And baby’s still sleeping 6 feet in the ground

[Photosoph]

Dark, but still a really excellent poem. Though I don't like dark ones as much as others, usually.
I really liked your first poem as well; a good repition of structure with neat twists and changes in the focus of each stanza. Very cool! Good to read more stuff from you. ^_^