they just dont understand

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they just dont understand

Postby Shinja » Sat Aug 23, 2003 11:45 am

they say the ten commandments must go, they hurt the unbelievers so, and so they condemn them selves in their superior way of thinking, they just don’t understand

they say there must be no guns to buy, that they cause people to die, and they don’t even mention how they've saved lives, and so they set the world off to captivity in their futile thinking, they just don’t understand

they say you have to follow the center line watch your words and be kind no matter what sins they do and say, and so they take your right to speech away, they just don’t understand

they say we all have rights, but don’t believe in God, and so they follow the rights of death, what they reap will be what they sow, they just don’t understand

they set criminals above us and say they’re just as good as you and so the world drips slowly down the hole like the falling dew, they just don’t understand

they teach your children socialism in their schools and so take all responsibility from them, its ok to do what you want its all someone else’s fault, they just don’t understand

oh church where have you been you’ve accepted your leaders and their sin, saying its just the way God made them to be, and so you follow lies I wonder where your treasure really lies on earth or is it in heaven, they just don’t understand

they just don’t understand His last words before He set us free. so love the sinner hate the sin and watch and wait for Me, for the world will hate you for My sake, but do not fall into fear or doubt for your bow may bend but will not break.
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Postby andyroo » Sat Aug 23, 2003 6:00 pm

Amen to that.
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Postby *Hope* » Sat Aug 23, 2003 6:55 pm

Ditto! That's really moving! keep up the good work!
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Postby Zal-Utaon III » Sat Aug 23, 2003 7:03 pm

Ill ?thrice? that sorry could never spell of have a sence of grammer
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Postby Matthew » Sat Aug 23, 2003 7:11 pm

I'm speach less!<<<Wait, I just said somthing... :sweat: >>> Well still, it's very good! :thumb:
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Postby Rashiir » Sat Aug 23, 2003 9:09 pm

I like it except "they set criminals above us and say thyere just as good as you." Personally, I don't think criminals are necessarily any worse than us because of what they've done in the past... I mean, if they've repented...
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Postby Shinja » Sat Aug 23, 2003 9:24 pm

well i posted that part about criminals because of the UN. they are currently trying thier best to play a greter role in the lives of more countries even bringing about resoultions that threaten the sovernty united states, and currently the persident of thier security councel is syria a know terrorist suporting country, and well as thier human rights board i beleve is headed by the sudan and america was recntly removed from this group.

i would like to see the US pull out of the UN but i doubt that will happen

but thanks, this started out as a song dont know if ill ever finnish writeing the music for it though
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Postby Technomancer » Sun Aug 24, 2003 5:41 am

I'll leave my politics out of this for now. But just one comment: you do realize that the "U.N. World Constitution" you quote is entirely fictitious don't you? The only document that could be called such is the U.N Charter, which doesn't contain anything remotely resembling the quote (I actually own a copy, and can easily point you to one on the web). The only place I have ever found that quote is on a few conspiracy theory sites that don't even quote or link to the full document.

I'm willing to admit the possibility that it was written by one of a variety of private "world federalist" organiztions and is not a complete fraud. However, the document itself has nothing to do with the U.N.
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Postby Shinja » Sun Aug 24, 2003 7:09 am

i figured it was a posibility, kept running across it and and similar phrases while looking up info on the web, rest asured it will be changed.

oh just so yall know the quote i had in my sig about the UN has nothing to do with my above lyrics.

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Postby majanthehun » Sun Aug 24, 2003 9:29 pm

i like it... i see no problem with the polotics about it. but then again, im not a very political person.
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Postby Mimichan » Mon Aug 25, 2003 2:45 pm

Nice poem. I would love to hear it in musical form too!^^
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