The Three Princesses

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The Three Princesses

Postby MyrrhLynn » Thu Nov 11, 2004 10:09 pm

Umm ok... this is my first time posting in this section (I haven't even lurked here :sweat: ) so sorry if I mess up this intro or something. I've been writing a story for my youngest sister since last spring, and well I haven't made a huge amount of progress I thought I would share it with everyone here.

I don't really want to clog up this section though. :dizzy: So I'm just going to include a small part and then you can go to my website for it to read the rest. Unless someone complains.. then I guess I'll attach them. ;)

So umm rating: This would probably be rated PG. I don't think there will be lots of swearwords but uhh... just in case I forgot I put them in. :sweat: So enough ranting, here's the small part of it : (go to http://www.myrrhlynn.net/story to read the rest)





“Katharine go and find your sister.â€
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Postby true_noir_chloe » Fri Nov 12, 2004 11:39 am

I like your dialogue Myrrhlynn. And, I'm reading the story now and really like it so far. Do you read Gail Carson Levine?

[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE


You see into the deepest part of me ---

beyond the fog I hide behind.

You cast your light upon the shadows

that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.

You ease the pain when I am hurting,

and morbid visions from my past

pierce into the realm of Reason

as though I danced on blades of glass.

You grant me strength when I have fallen

and, once again, I've lost my way.

You take my hand in Yours and lead me

into the promise of a brand new day.

You bring order to all my chaos,

yet set my well-laid plans awry.

You place me on a firm foundation ---

then give me wings so I can fly.

You sand away my roughened edges

and polish all the dullest parts

until I stand before Your presence...

a newly-sculpted work of art.

You see into the heart within me,

right through my motives and selfish will.

And yet, in spite of all You see

You say You love me even still.


~by D.M.~

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Postby MyrrhLynn » Mon Nov 15, 2004 9:11 am

Awww thanks! :hug: Hummm is Gail Carson Levine the woman who wrote Ella enchanted? I have read that book but not her other ones, although I want to. :) There are maybe a few simalarities in my stories since I loved that book so much. ;) I really like how Ella is independent with plenty of girl power but she doesn't mind help from the Prince. :lol: All the girl power movies that are coming out are nice, but it starts to get choking after awhile. :lol:
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Postby Icarus » Sun Nov 21, 2004 10:09 pm

I tried to get to your site to read more, and was either redirected, or received an error message.
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Postby MyrrhLynn » Thu Dec 02, 2004 10:29 pm

Icarus wrote:I tried to get to your site to read more, and was either redirected, or received an error message.

Wow sorry I'm slow to reply to this. :sweat: Uhh.. the link works fine for me. My hosting service might have been down the exact moment you clicked on it. Sorry about that.
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