Drago

[pyro_moogle]

I started this story when I was in sixth grade. I have more written but is is still in handwritten form. Despite the beginning it turns out to be a christian fantasy fiction. I have many notes on it but I am too lazy and not motivated enough to keep writing.

[Kaori]

More than anything else, I encourage you to continue writing. You have some interesting ideas, and I would like to see the story developed further. There are several unanswered questions I have about the world you have created, but that in and of itself is not necessarily a problem, especially if some of these details will be explained later in the story.

If it helps to know this, although there was no explicitly Christian material in the story thus far, neither did I see anything that particularly conflicts with Christianity.

At this point in time, the only suggestion I wish to offer is to consider using a different text. While the current formatting is readable, it would be somewhat more friendly to your readers to use a more standard font.

[pyro_moogle]

ok it is just a big font so i used it to fill up space

[starwarsboy90]

This looks pretty good, I'd definitly say " Keep on writing", you have a gift and you should keep on using what God gave you. I did and look at me now, check out my post, by the way.