Hey everyone, boy it's been a while since I posted a poem on here. Anyways, here is one that I finally finished just a few days ago. It's different from most of my other ones (read: not depressing) , so I hope y'all will still enjoy it.
Unspoken Lullabies
Yesterday I said hello and
I wanted you to hear just how I feel
through words I cannot say
and though there are none to let you know
I wrote a song for you today
and I played it till my fingers bled
and this bullet that I'd take for you
will be melted down into a cage
that will not let me go
that will not let me speak
what you have never known
and what I have never said
is that I would die a thousand times
to be free of this cage
and be able to say these words
instead of just hello
Brand Spizzankin' New Poem
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Brand Spizzankin' New Poem
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Rachel - Posts: 1056
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Very deep and meaningful. Excellent.
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[Quote=Photosoph]Well, t'was a good deduction, Mr. Holmes! *salutes Mr. Myoti Sherlock Homes* [/QUOTE]
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[Quote=Photosoph]Well, t'was a good deduction, Mr. Holmes! *salutes Mr. Myoti Sherlock Homes* [/QUOTE]
Myoti wrote:Elementary, my dear Watsoph. XD
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Photosoph - Posts: 1528
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Wow, this break from writing you took did wonders. I'd say this is your best work so far, Rachel, my friend... sorry, my homefry. ~_^
Please, write some more. ^______^
Please, write some more. ^______^
[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE
You see into the deepest part of me ---
beyond the fog I hide behind.
You cast your light upon the shadows
that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.
You ease the pain when I am hurting,
and morbid visions from my past
pierce into the realm of Reason
as though I danced on blades of glass.
You grant me strength when I have fallen
and, once again, I've lost my way.
You take my hand in Yours and lead me
into the promise of a brand new day.
You bring order to all my chaos,
yet set my well-laid plans awry.
You place me on a firm foundation ---
then give me wings so I can fly.
You sand away my roughened edges
and polish all the dullest parts
until I stand before Your presence...
a newly-sculpted work of art.
You see into the heart within me,
right through my motives and selfish will.
And yet, in spite of all You see
You say You love me even still.
~by D.M.~
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true_noir_chloe - Posts: 3091
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wow. . . it's like you know what I've been trying to express but have failed at misserably a thousand time and you wrote it down on paper, thank you, I needed that ^_^ you did a wonderfull job
[color="DimGray"]I don't believe that I would die if I saw you face to face;
but that my spirit would become so alive it took my body's place.
- Danya[/color]
but that my spirit would become so alive it took my body's place.
- Danya[/color]
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Danyasaur - Posts: 875
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Thanks, y'all. I should have a new one up in a few days. I have a few lines running around in my head right now and I just need a few more and then I can write it down. Until then, I guess y'all can just read this one again. Haha. Bye for now.
I mourn for those who never knew you
Click here for kick booty music!!
American by birth, Texan by the grace of God
This is where you can find me if I'm not on for a while
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Rachel - Posts: 1056
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the stars
Okay, here is the poem that I just finished today. I don't know if it makes much sense so I may rewrite it sometime. Or I might not. I don't know, I'm always second guessing everything I write. Anyways...here it is.
Your eyes draw me in
and I am hypnotized
by the music of your osng
and your shining light
and I am melting
not even the stars
could shine so brilliant
and make me lose myself
to all that I have known
and all I have longed for
was found in their beauty
that no one has believed
the stars and how they shine for me
in the night sky
and sing their beautiful song
that makes me forget where I am
that makes me want to forget
and never remember again
Your eyes draw me in
and I am hypnotized
by the music of your osng
and your shining light
and I am melting
not even the stars
could shine so brilliant
and make me lose myself
to all that I have known
and all I have longed for
was found in their beauty
that no one has believed
the stars and how they shine for me
in the night sky
and sing their beautiful song
that makes me forget where I am
that makes me want to forget
and never remember again
I mourn for those who never knew you
Click here for kick booty music!!
American by birth, Texan by the grace of God
This is where you can find me if I'm not on for a while
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Rachel - Posts: 1056
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- Location: Wichita Falls, Texas
Wow, another great poem, Rachel! ^_______^ Keep 'em coming, like fries at a McDonalds. ~_^
[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE
You see into the deepest part of me ---
beyond the fog I hide behind.
You cast your light upon the shadows
that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.
You ease the pain when I am hurting,
and morbid visions from my past
pierce into the realm of Reason
as though I danced on blades of glass.
You grant me strength when I have fallen
and, once again, I've lost my way.
You take my hand in Yours and lead me
into the promise of a brand new day.
You bring order to all my chaos,
yet set my well-laid plans awry.
You place me on a firm foundation ---
then give me wings so I can fly.
You sand away my roughened edges
and polish all the dullest parts
until I stand before Your presence...
a newly-sculpted work of art.
You see into the heart within me,
right through my motives and selfish will.
And yet, in spite of all You see
You say You love me even still.
~by D.M.~
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true_noir_chloe - Posts: 3091
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I'm not a very big fan of the fries at Mickey D's. hehe. Thanks, Chloe. I'm sort of working on a new one now so maybe it should be up in a few days.
I mourn for those who never knew you
Click here for kick booty music!!
American by birth, Texan by the grace of God
This is where you can find me if I'm not on for a while
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Rachel - Posts: 1056
- Joined: Tue Nov 18, 2003 10:00 am
- Location: Wichita Falls, Texas
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