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Sight- a song

PostPosted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 5:12 pm
by LightUpTheDark
This is a song I wrote for a project I'm working on. Tell me what you think, please. I'm not very good at song writing...:hits_self



[size=200]Sight


1. How much is enough,

When is the cost too great to pay?

When will our sacrifices become offerings,

Why is someday always another day away?



We’re all just living in chains

Prisoners of a deep shame

I live life blindfolded.

t’s a sorry way to live.



Chorus 1-

And…

I can’t see the light

For all the darkness in my eyes.

I can’t see the way

For all the lies I’ve been told.

I can’t feel the day

For all the pain I live through

I can’t see the light

From all the evil in my view.


Some body save me!



2.But I caught a glimmer of hope today.

It kept shining through

Even in the rain.

It held echoes of the past

And whispers of something new.



I recognized its song…

It reminded me of you.

Someday is finally today.

And I’m free to let go

Of all the pain I held onto.


Chorus 2-

And…

The stars are shining so bright tonight!

This could be the day….

I’m ready for the change.

And I can finally see,

There’s so much beyond me.

I can see the sparks flying….

This is how it feels to be alive.



Bridge-

It’s time for the revolutionary cry to sound.

And all mankind gathers around.

To break away from the norm

We must be transformed,

Into the image of the One.



It’s His love that sparked the revolution.

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© AMM 2005

PostPosted: Tue Apr 19, 2005 1:48 pm
by sonichiro
sweet! i loved it! ^__________^

PostPosted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 6:47 pm
by LightUpTheDark
Thanks! I liked it too, but I thought it might have just been a me thing...lol