The order

[faithfighter]

Prelude:
“Hello. No don’t speak; I already know why you are here. How? I can see it in your eyes, you’re a seeker. Come sit. We have much to speak of and little time to do so. Now where to start? It was 2017. The world was finally united in peace. To keep that peace the Order was made. Under the Order things were simple. There was a set way of things and that kept people from crime. It was simple. You knew what to expect from life. Once born, your parents would raise you till you were preschool age. Then you would be taken to one of the many Order schools, where you would stay twenty-four seven till you turn 21. Then you could expect to do whatever job your parents did before you. Never expecting more or less. Then the Order would pick out a wife for you. Then you would have kids and the cycle would start over again. That was the way of things. You thought what the Order taught you to think and believed what the order taught you to believe. No one ever defied the Order. No one ever doubted the Order. No one ever questioned the Order, except the handful of people know to the rest of the world as trouble makers, but to themselves they were seekers…

Chapter 1: The Oldest Conor Child
Now there were three children born to the same parents. They even went to the same school, buy they didn’t know each other. There was the oldest, Athren Conor; then Cathlyn Conor, and Evan Conor. Like the rest of the students at their Order school they never questioned anything. Always following the system, until the day something unexpected happened. Athren Conor over slept!
“Morning again.â€

[faithfighter]

Chapter 2: The Middle Conor Child
Cathlyn Conor walked down the hall. Her face was emotionless. Her red hair pulled back into a braid then wrapped around into a bun giving her a serious look. Her green eyes masked by glasses she didn’t even need. A teacher named Mr.Em came walking up to her. He had black hair that was speckled with gray. His wrinkled features appeared to never have seen a smile and his wide brimmed glasses made he look like a no none sense type.
“Ms. Conor, I am in a hurry today so deliver this to room B in the back building. Just stay away from room A at all cost!â€

[Sakura15]

Oooo....cool! great job FF-chan!

[faithfighter]

thanks glad you like it...I am now working on Chapter 3!!! all of this was writen thius week and most today so todays been great for progress!

[faithfighter]

Chapter 3:
Athren deeply disturbed by the old man from earlier went to see the Principle. The Principle was not the kind of person you want to mess with. At the school his way was law! He wasn’t whom you wanted mad at you, and missing class made him mad!
“Hello Mr. Conor. I heard you missed class today. This does not make me happy. It will not go unpunished!â€

[Sakura15]

This is great FF-chan!! I cant wait for more ^^

[Pent]

Hey! My name is Evan! This is a great story so far Faith Fighter!

[faithfighter]

thanks. So Evan just wait till Evan comes in!
Glad you like it..working on the 4th chapter now so...this is further then I have ever gotten in a story!!! I am so happy!

[Arnobius]

Very nice

[faithfighter]

tanky tanky *hugs*

[Arnobius]

I really have to stop lazy and do something myself...