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Ranpunzel - Kokoro's return to the writing forum

Postby Debitt » Mon May 30, 2005 6:18 pm

;) Bet most of you people didn't even know I used drop in here.

Anyways, after battling writer's block for several months, I finally produced a piece of literary work that I've deemed acceptable. Unfortunately for the general populus, this certain piece of literary work happens to be an on-crack parody of the classical fairy tale, Rapunzel.

But whatever...without further ado:

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[SIZE="5"](*゚∀゚)アハア八アッ八ッノヽ~☆[/SIZE]
[SIZE="1"]DEBS: Fan of that manga where the kid's head is on fire.[/SIZE]
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Postby Icarus » Mon May 30, 2005 8:12 pm

That was hilarious. I wondered what Crescent would do when he met Bob.
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Postby Yumie » Mon May 30, 2005 9:02 pm

Bob, eh? I take it you have something against the name Ran. . . you're so discriminating, I think I'll sue. . .

No seriously now, quite funny. Good job. I commend you for your creativity. (Hmmmm. . . Somehow all those periods don't quite make for the enthusiasm I intend. Oh well.) I wish I could come up with fun stories, but I suffer from permanent writers block. So like I said, good job, keep up the good work! (Wow, and exclamation point!)
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Postby Photosoph » Tue May 31, 2005 2:42 pm

Sweet! I love fairy-tale spoof off type writings. ^_^ I remember writing a few... only mind tended to be kinda creepy. :S Not sure why, though. Creepy as in horror, by the way.
Excellent writing! Heh heh, Ranpunzel... Bobpunzel... :grin:
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Postby Jasdero » Wed Jun 01, 2005 8:39 pm

XD!!!!!!!!!!!! Right on, Kokoro! >__> So, who is Torres, anyway?
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Postby true_noir_chloe » Wed Jun 01, 2005 8:40 pm

THE BUNNIES ARE COMING!!! ROFL... ^_____^

Kokoro, this is not one of my favorite pieces of work that you've written, but it is very humorous. I'm sorry I took so long to comment.

[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE


You see into the deepest part of me ---

beyond the fog I hide behind.

You cast your light upon the shadows

that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.

You ease the pain when I am hurting,

and morbid visions from my past

pierce into the realm of Reason

as though I danced on blades of glass.

You grant me strength when I have fallen

and, once again, I've lost my way.

You take my hand in Yours and lead me

into the promise of a brand new day.

You bring order to all my chaos,

yet set my well-laid plans awry.

You place me on a firm foundation ---

then give me wings so I can fly.

You sand away my roughened edges

and polish all the dullest parts

until I stand before Your presence...

a newly-sculpted work of art.

You see into the heart within me,

right through my motives and selfish will.

And yet, in spite of all You see

You say You love me even still.


~by D.M.~

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