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take me and make me - poem...of course

PostPosted: Fri Jul 29, 2005 2:24 am
by c.t.,girl
ok...so i haven't written a poem in quite sometime...ok maybe it's more like i haven't written a poem that i wouldn't mind sharing on this cite...er...nvm...>.>;;; anyway...i've written one now...and i'm thinkin' of turing it into a song...with a little help from a few friends...who none of you know. XD...>.> anyway...here it is...lemme know what you guys think! ^__^ thanks!

~chris :dizzy:

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Take Me and Make Me
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You are the water to make me grow
You are the food for my soul
Take me and plant me
Plant me where it seems
Like hope is lost
So I may show the world
That wherever You place a hand
You’ll always be there
That wherever You are
Hope is still there

You are the hope
That makes dreams come true
You are the breath
That makes old lives new

O Lord let me be the mirror
The mirror that shows the love
The love that You have for those
In this heartless world
Let me be the window
The window to the hope
That shows that dreams really do come true
Even to a generation of a sleepless, dreamless world
That will one day see its doom

You are the one
The one to save us
The one to make us one with You
The one that knows what is truly true
You are our everything
So open our eyes to let us see
So we can see Your awesomeness

O Lord do Your work in me
Shine through me
For all those in this world to see
Make me strong
Then tear me down
Only to make me new
I come willingly
I will do all things for You

So take me and make me
Make me broken to you

PostPosted: Fri Jul 29, 2005 4:58 am
by holysoldier5000
Awsome poem! I love the depth of its truth. Great job!

Smiley face audience:
=D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D>

...he he XD

God Bless
~HS5000

PostPosted: Fri Jul 29, 2005 5:03 am
by c.t.,girl
XDD thanks OB 1! ^__^ and i shall indeed use the force...XDDDD

PostPosted: Fri Jul 29, 2005 1:51 pm
by kumiko213
i like it sissy..

PostPosted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 11:52 pm
by c.t.,girl
hehe thanks nicci! ^__^

PostPosted: Mon Aug 01, 2005 6:14 pm
by Rachel
Nice!

PostPosted: Mon Aug 01, 2005 9:32 pm
by kumiko213
c.t.,girl wrote:hehe thanks nicci! ^__^



you're welcome sissy do i know the ppl who are helping u make it into a song?

PostPosted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 9:25 pm
by c.t.,girl
Nice!

Thanks!

you're welcome sissy do i know the ppl who are helping u make it into a song?

uh...only by phone. XD...>.>...XD

PostPosted: Wed Aug 03, 2005 8:40 pm
by Rachel
So, do you have any more poems that you'd be willing to post?