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A few of my poems, others welcome to post their poems too.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 10:35 am
by Sage_Al-Kahira
I just thought of this one i really like it.
A Poem about Jesus
Tears of blood drip down my face,
As I look at this unholy place,
Why should someone such as I,
Cry for Jesus who has to die,
Soon I'll be in heaven with thee,
Walking hand in hand Idly.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 7:40 pm
by Photosoph
Very good, Sage. It's a good subject, too; I've read quite a few poems on a similar subject matter, but they all seem to have an original angle, and it's definitely an important subject. There were a few small spelling/grammar mistakes, but on the whole, good. ^_^
PostPosted: Fri Oct 14, 2005 11:15 am
by Sage_Al-Kahira
Thanks oh and i now fixed the mistakes.
PostPosted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 8:26 pm
by Wind
this is poem about Jesus too, I thought I would stick with Sage's theme
The Tree
Amazing grace that blessed friend should lay His life down for the likes of me a wretched sinner, a smartmouthed teen. He laid down his life to save a wretch like me. He did it through that forsaken tree as He died he thought of me
Hope you like it, I thought it was kinda good
PostPosted: Wed Oct 19, 2005 6:53 pm
by agasfas
I really like both of y'alls poems. Very inspirational indeed. Remembering how much Christ cares for us really brightens my day. Thanks Sage and Jade
PostPosted: Wed Oct 19, 2005 7:50 pm
by SP1
Not a poem about Jesus; at least, I didn't originally mean it that way:
Flying
High
Like an eagle
Among the clouds
But wait
Look
Far below
A world
Too busy
To notice me
PostPosted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 9:53 pm
by Wind
Here is another poem
Dragon Caretaker
Pure elfin beauty, immortal and fair was the caretaker of dragons, she wore clothes of emerald dragon scale and a helm atop her head, She held a sword in one hand and a scale in the other, the scale to judge the sword to kill, she chose to deem love, gentleness, death, life, joy and sorrow, she chose these as the most important things, everlasting and forever she was the caretaker of dragons and of these things she sought nothingand came to nothingness for she was empty and nothing but a simple caretaker of dragons
I hope you guys like this poem