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Black Wine

PostPosted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 5:05 pm
by Sakura's Wings
Just so every one knows, this poem is about Satan (represented by Black Wine) and all the horrible things he does. One of my Very close friends is Satanist, and i need prayer to let me know how to help him and for him to see God.

Black Wine

Black Wine is your poision, your sin, is your hate
But it has the ingridient that makes it so you can’t taste
Black Wine is your religion, your mask, is your faith
The one who makes your drink makes it so you can’t think

Others around you know you should quit
they know it controlls you
You think you’re through with it
In reality youre not, and reality never lies
If you continue to drink your Black Wine
you’ll die alone in a world of lies

You’ve become a part of the Wine, of this poision, this mix
Once you’re too far in, it becomes something you cannot fix
The Black Wine will kill you from the inside out
And alone you’ll die, with no way out

You’re trapped in a room with no windows, no doors
You’re suspended, harnessed, with 9-inch nails for floors
The chains will release you, from one torture to the next
You’ll never be set free, your destiny forever set

You’d never again have anyone at your side
no one to comfort or hold you on this wild ride
You’re all alone, your fate eternally sealed
Black Wine has taken over, you’ll never be healed.

So drop your goblet of Dark Black Wine,
Spill the poision to the floor, you are now released
Your shackles turn to dust
Bound no more you will be

Black Wine no longer controlls you, you now are free
You have loved ones at your side and alone you’ll never be
because you’ve left your deadly Black Wine

PostPosted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 5:12 pm
by Naga Kisaki
Wow.... That's very good, but frightening. And it exspresses the truth, Black Wine is a perfect metaphor for satan's lies.


I'll pray for your friend.

PostPosted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 5:19 pm
by Sakura's Wings
thank you so much. i have also posted more explanation in the Prayer Room under a title called Prayer for a friend in serious need of God

PostPosted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 6:22 pm
by Anna Mae
Good. It expresses the truth well.

PostPosted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 10:04 pm
by Warrior 4 Jesus
Wow, that's really dark and well written and clearly shows what life with out God would be like. How do you write this stuff? I'll be praying for your friend Sakura's Wings.

PostPosted: Thu Mar 09, 2006 4:26 pm
by Sakura's Wings
honestly, i dont know ho i wright this stuff, it just comes, but i had to work on it a bit
thank you so much!

PostPosted: Sun Mar 19, 2006 1:38 pm
by Sakura's Wings
btw, if anyone hasd any suggestions for a Godly wine poesm, please let me know

PostPosted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 11:49 am
by Anna Mae
What would you call that? White wine to represent purity? Red wine to represent Jesus' blood? That's interesting. I will think on that.

PostPosted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 11:52 pm
by Warrior 4 Jesus
Anna Mae, sound's very Ted Dekkerish.

PostPosted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 3:19 pm
by Sakura's Wings
actually i was thinking either one of those, not sure yet

PostPosted: Thu Mar 23, 2006 1:48 pm
by Anna Mae
Warrior 4 Jesus wrote:Anna Mae, sound's very Ted Dekkerish.
I do not understand.