The intro to my book
PostPosted: Mon May 22, 2006 3:40 pm
Hey guys!
For awhile, I have wanted to finish my book, I stopped when my grandmother became sick last year and haven't picked it up since her death...here is the opening sentences to Hope Springs Eternal...tell me if I should go on or delete.
Chapter 1
Ryoko's Leave
Ryoko ran though the rugged forest : jumping trees and tripping , scrapping herself badly, with blood running down her arms and legs , yet she ignored the
pain . One thing raced through her mind :
Ryoko : “ I just want to get away !â€
For awhile, I have wanted to finish my book, I stopped when my grandmother became sick last year and haven't picked it up since her death...here is the opening sentences to Hope Springs Eternal...tell me if I should go on or delete.
Chapter 1
Ryoko's Leave
Ryoko ran though the rugged forest : jumping trees and tripping , scrapping herself badly, with blood running down her arms and legs , yet she ignored the
pain . One thing raced through her mind :
Ryoko : “ I just want to get away !â€