CAA: Christian Anime Alliance

hey i nver knew theres a writing thing here dang i neeed to get out of the rpg threads more:lol: anyway here it is:

the heart

the heart is what keeps us living
the heart is where our love begins
the hearts where our soul lives and
where our brokeness begins

i have seen the ones who say they love
their wifes but inside they are longing
for a purpose other then loving them
they lead double lives one loving and caring
one hating and schemeing

the heart is what keeps us living
the heart is where our love begins
the heart is where the soul is and
where our brokeness begins

the ones we love are part of us but
do we truly love them?
do we truly what to protect them?
what is it today that makes us all mad with
power?

the heart is what keeps us living
the heart is where our heart begins
the heart is where our soul is and
where the brokeness begins

there are those who what power to control the world
there are those who want power to heal
but they are all the same that same power
corrupts and distorts all the well intended things
these people thought of

the heart is what keeps us living
the heart is where our love begins
the heart is where the soul is and
where the brokeness begins...



the end comments are apperciated

Hm interesting song.

It is good, you might want to mention that the Heart apart from Christ is decetfull beyond all things

yeah i am still working on it i will post the full song later i am to lazy to do it now

i thinkit flows better if u leave out the "our" in

the hearts where our soul lives and
where our brokeness begins

brokenness is kinda a akward word. id try to find a simmilar yet different one.

but yea, nice

me like, it describes the truth well

thanks for the comments and you all i may be doing a wall if i can get it the right size for this look for it sometime

the heart

the heart is what keeps us living
the heart is where our love begins
the hearts where our soul lives and
where our brokeness begins

i have seen the ones who say they love
their wifes but inside they are longing
for a purpose other then loving them
they lead double lives one loving and caring
one hating and schemeing

the heart is what keeps us living
the heart is where our love begins
the heart is where the soul is and
where our brokeness begins

the ones we love are part of us but
do we truly love them?
do we truly what to protect them?
what is it today that makes us all mad with
power?

the heart is what keeps us living
the heart is where our heart begins
the heart is where our soul is and
where the brokeness begins

there are those who what power to control the world
there are those who want power to heal
but they are all the same that same power
corrupts and distorts all the well intended things
these people thought of

the heart is what keeps us living
the heart is where our love begins
the heart is where the soul is and
where the brokeness begins

when i watch the ones who love christ
they make an example to others
so that others may belive in him
the one they call!!!!!! GOD!!!!!!


thats the whole song enjoy all

Good.
One Question Do you count yourself amoung us

as a christian yes i am writing it through the eyes of a non-beliver i tend to go into the eyes of the person i want to protray in my songs its sorta my personal touch in my songs

I see