Unlit- Just a quickwrite...

[Chii]

A dark shadow
Repelled the good, light.
Haunting anyone, everyone and me.

I walked and walked...
I hid and hid...
Until there was no hope left.

So damp and dark I felt myself chocking, drowning in the air.
My nothingness engulfed me.
I stretched my hand infront of me...it was so dark I could see...
NOTHING
I waved and shook
NOTHING
I tried a 1,2,3
NOTHING
When had I let myself become nothing?

One day I felt myself awake,
or so I thought.
Unable to tell yesterday from today or morning from night.
In the remote distance of absolute stillness, there was a small twinkle of light.
How? I asked myself.
Weary, I tread closer and closer each day.
Mesmerized by something I was not.

Any moment I would get close enough to see the particles of dust in anti-gravity.
I would RUN away so far, I had forgotten about that ray of light.
But everytime I felt my eyes open, there it was, amongst the emptiness.
This was the moment I was going to do what I never could.
I touched the ray of light, and as I did my fears washed away.
HOW?!! It can't be!, I began to panick.
I could finaly see me, this warm feeling enveloped my skin and all the darkness and hopelessness...
... was forgotten.

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There's some symbolism as to what the darkness is and what the light is.
I'm not sure where this all came from, this morning during my Contemp-Summer-Class, I just picked up my pen and wrote away.

[QtheQreater]

*sees religious symbolism*

I like it.

[Esoteric]

Yeah, good visuals and description. I like this sort of prose very much.

[Chii]

Thank you QtheQreater, I think you're on the right track ^.^


Esocentric, I'm glad you could see my words.