Why Brother Id is Kept in a Cage

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Why Brother Id is Kept in a Cage

Postby Dante » Fri Sep 01, 2006 7:19 am

[align=center]Why Brother Id is kept in a Cage
By: Pascal

Bean burrito on the floor
Bean burrito and I want more
Be it here a penta-second, I should not ignore
Beyond this hour though, my tummy may roar
Bereave me this thought, no longer will I explore
Being that with this “gulpâ€
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Postby Zarn Ishtare » Fri Sep 01, 2006 10:16 am

Don't make me get the Super Ego in here!
With your doubt, all is comfort
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
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Postby Dante » Fri Sep 01, 2006 1:16 pm

lol that's great Zarn! Actually, that is where I got the word Id from, I had to do three poems for my class next week and I was considering writing one from Id, Ego and Superego... but I think that this is the only one that worked... wrote it after eating at Taco Bell (Grilled Stuffed Burrito)... no none fell on the floor, and luckily superego would never allow me to do such a thing and even id would be turned off eating from ASU's floors O_O ...
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Postby Zarn Ishtare » Sat Sep 02, 2006 9:09 am

Ha, thats what you get for messing with the guy who passed psych 101....

Alot of ego and no place to put it.


By the way, what prompted you to finally write out your crazy?
With your doubt, all is comfort
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
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Postby Dante » Sat Sep 02, 2006 2:53 pm

A writing course of course... yes I just rhymed course with course... Yet I feel no remorse...
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