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OK~ First, this is One P1ece, a 'parallel/alternate universe' of the One Piece Series. A friend (CosimicDebris again. For some reason we come up with the craziest ideas together so I just have to draw them) and I were talking about Sanji and Nami and it was like "what if Sanji didn't like Nami?" So it escalated into an entire ... somthing. So I decided to turn it into a comic (mostly for practice, and also I thought it would be fun). SO you probably won't get much of it if you've never read One Piece, in which case you're missing out like you have no idea; both with my comic and ESPECIALLY with the original series. I suppose it could be enjoyable without reading the original, it just won't be as funny.

Minimum age: Gah, that's difficult. 7+ I guess.... It's not for me to judge really.

Violence: 5 I suppose. Haven't really gotten that far yet, but just as a warning becuase there will be blood. It is a pirate story after all. As of now, 0.

Language: 2 at the very extreme most. Like maybe 'A' or 'D' and used only in extreme situations. But as of now, 0.

Sexual Content: 2 I suppose. No sex at all, but... one of the characters is a tad flamey.

Nudity (or skimpy outfits): 1 for now because I haven't fully written out the story. But as of now, it's 0.

Bad Religion: 2 just because it's about pirates. No magic or religion involved.

Other: 3 There will be alcohol and one of the characters is a chain smoker.

^ I'll update this as the story goes along. It should be about 3 chapters.


ONE P1ECE: a parallel universe of One Piece

Chapter 1

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Chapter 1 is about 75% finished.

That is FREAKING HILARIOUS! *lol* I love the thoughtful Luffy!

Somehow, I think Oda would be proud (if it has giant robots, you know he'd go for it XD ).

I found it funny that Sanji (he's short! :O ) was coughing during the Smoke Star, even though he was still smoking.

And WHAT THE SHIZ?! SOGEKING?! O.O

Myoti wrote:Somehow, I think Oda would be proud (if it has giant robots, you know he'd go for it XD ).

:O You know.... that's strikingly similar to a comic I wrote earlier in the year... Ya know what, if you download THIS ZIP FILE , you'll get all my earlier comics, including the Usopp doujinshi I forementioned and all my one-shots. There is some blood, and a bit of curseing. I hope 'crap' doesn't count. o__o Anyway, old old art from almost a year ago. Don't judge plz. x3 It's kinda interesting because I never knew how to draw Usopp before I made that, so I kinda had to force myself to.

I found it funny that Sanji (he's short! :O ) was coughing during the Smoke Star, even though he was still smoking.

xD You know, you're the second person that caught that, and I'm glad. All I can say is that I was afraid people wouldn't get the joke and secondly, I didn't want to take away from Sogeking's entrance.


XD Thanks guys, glad you like it so far! ^^ I should have two more pages by next friday so keep a look out.

I'm checkin' the old one now.

Oh, and I finally caught something about Luffy. When he shows up, he actually recognizes Sogeking! XD

And Chopper's scary. O.O

Also, is there a particular reason to Usopp having a mustache?

Also, is there a particular reason to Usopp having a mustache?

Actually yes, but I'm not going to reveal all the inspiration I've had for this until it's finished. ^^

Ah, I see.

"OH MY GOSH, YOU KILLED FRANKY! Now Paulie will have to join the crew!" XD

HILARIOUS! *claps*

Usopp reminds me of Mario.

That aside, I like what I see. Interesting execution, so far. I'd like to see more of an apparently intelligent Luffy.

Gah, I'm sorry but there won't be any new pages this week. Finals x__x

Ah. Same here.... kinda. :p

I don't follow One Piece at all so I wouldn't get the references. But still, the artwork is great and this looks interesting. XD Keep up the great work!

I don't follow One Piece at all so I wouldn't get the references. But still, the artwork is great and this looks interesting. XD Keep up the great work!

You really should then. You may like it. ^_^

Mave wrote:I don't follow One Piece at all so I wouldn't get the references. But still, the artwork is great and this looks interesting. XD Keep up the great work!

same here.

Woot, finally!

Page 9
Page 10

Yay, Taboo-sama!

"I do so like me spinach..." for some odd reason, I could so see Franky saying that.

And Zoro's flower disappeared! \o.o/

This is a welcome surprise. My apologies if you have already answered this, but how long of a comic do you have in mind?

I'm going for about 3 chapters worth. =/ I need to pick up the pace...

Dang, only half of them show up. The rest is blocked.

:/ Darn, that stinks. Here's a .zip file of all the pages thus far for you: http://h1.ripway.com/ragweed/op1ece.zip

Soooooo.......out of character.

FUNNY!

3 chapters hmmm? Good good...more to look forward too. XD

Just out of curiosity, is there going to be any updates? Just asking.

Yes, there will be soon! =D

Ah good!!

Very funny! I'm a little out of the loop only having seen three or four episodes of the show. Lovely artwork though.

Completely off topic:
It threw me for a loop seeing taboo's and bigsleepj's avatars one after the other. They are fairly similar, what with the toothy, large nosed, black hat with white band-ed, left facing characters and all. lol

"And I do so likes me spinach."
That's really funny!


COOL! COOL! COOL!

I like.

I'm liking what I see so far.

Any more? ? ? ?
Please? ? ? ?
With sugar on top? ? ? ?
So when are you going to do more?

:< I don't know, it's on temporary hiatus...