Anna Mae wrote:
Weep without despair.
Bittersweet the strangest praise]I like this last line, but I am not sure what the haiku means collectively.[/b]
Sin, you sutpid beast,
Your hold on me is broken.
Must you whine so much?Heh. I liked the first two lines, but the third one made them even better. I especially like your imagery here.
I might not get what you want from that, but I dont think its that hard to understand.Weep without despair.
Bittersweet the strangest praise;
Joy in the mourning
Ratrace wrote:It took me not long
To see that you're the master
Of very good haiku
Anna Mae wrote:So, it seems the gard-
-'Ner who tends Dante's forest
Is absent today. Unfortunately I have not studied Dante yet, so I do not fully grasp the meaning of this poem.
Anna Mae wrote:In what language is the title?
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