fairyprincess90 wrote:alot of poems i write i write when im sad... v_v but it helps to get my feelings out... i wanna know if any of them touch you... i know it helps me to read about other peoples struggles because then i feel like im not alone...
these two are for a good friend i had who really hurt me... v_v
~MY PAIN~
Walking slow,
My hand running along the fence beside me,
No one could ever know,
The things I feel and the things I see,
My eyes stare ahead,
My fingers go numb as they glide over the wire,
All these thoughts running through my head,
My heart burns as if on fire<
I wish all of me would go numb,
So that I would not feel this pain,
You make me feel stupid and dumb,
You treat my love for you as if it were a game,
You were a brother to me,
To you I opened my heart,
Can't you see,
How you tore my life apart,
Rain falls from the sky,
Tears fall from my eyes,
I kiss the memories good-bye,
I cry,
But I must go on,
Down life’s lonely road,
With you I’m done,
and on with life I go.
this one is axcually a song... not a poem... i write songs too.
For The One Who Is No More
I have two words for you,
Its over,
I tried to be a friend to you,
But I’m through,
You broke my heart into,
A million pieces,
I’ve had enough of this,
Enough of you,
You fought with me, you hurt me,
And you never said you’re sorry,
You’ve always tried to prove me wrong,
I’ve put up with you way too long,
And now all I have to say,
Is that I say a prayer for you everyday,
I have two words for you,
Its over,
I did what I wanted to,
And now we’re no more,
I tried to be your to be your friend,
But you didn’t want me,
And It’s a shame things can’t be the same,
As they were before,
You fought with me, you hurt me,
And you never said you’re sorry,
You’ve always tried to prove me wrong,
I’ve put up with you way too long,
And now all I have to say,
Is that I say a prayer for you everyday,
It’s sad that you had to loose so many friends,
And it’s sad this had to be the end,
It’s sad that you had to loose me as a friend,
And it’s sad this had to end.
Anna Mae wrote:Smashing Mirrors That Show Me My Imperfections
I think that this poem would be more disturbing if it was entitled, "Pretty."
Did you actually do that?
Try using Jesus as your mirror...
Epitaph
I thought that the poem was really cool. The only drawback is the last line. That gives it a different feel.
fairyprincess90 wrote:alot of poems i write i write when im sad... v_v but it helps to get my feelings out... i wanna know if any of them touch you... i know it helps me to read about other peoples struggles because then i feel like im not alone...
these two are for a good friend i had who really hurt me... v_v
~MY PAIN~
Walking slow,
My hand running along the fence beside me,
No one could ever know,
The things I feel and the things I see,
My eyes stare ahead,
My fingers go numb as they glide over the wire,
All these thoughts running through my head,
My heart burns as if on fire<
I wish all of me would go numb,
So that I would not feel this pain,
You make me feel stupid and dumb,
You treat my love for you as if it were a game,
You were a brother to me,
To you I opened my heart,
Can't you see,
How you tore my life apart,
Rain falls from the sky,
Tears fall from my eyes,
I kiss the memories good-bye,
I cry,
But I must go on,
Down life’s lonely road,
With you I’m done,
and on with life I go.
this one is axcually a song... not a poem... i write songs too.
For The One Who Is No More
I have two words for you,
Its over,
I tried to be a friend to you,
But I’m through,
You broke my heart into,
A million pieces,
I’ve had enough of this,
Enough of you,
You fought with me, you hurt me,
And you never said you’re sorry,
You’ve always tried to prove me wrong,
I’ve put up with you way too long,
And now all I have to say,
Is that I say a prayer for you everyday,
I have two words for you,
Its over,
I did what I wanted to,
And now we’re no more,
I tried to be your to be your friend,
But you didn’t want me,
And It’s a shame things can’t be the same,
As they were before,
You fought with me, you hurt me,
And you never said you’re sorry,
You’ve always tried to prove me wrong,
I’ve put up with you way too long,
And now all I have to say,
Is that I say a prayer for you everyday,
It’s sad that you had to loose so many friends,
And it’s sad this had to be the end,
It’s sad that you had to loose me as a friend,
And it’s sad this had to end.
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