Staress~* A Journey of Many Circumstances {Shojo/Comedy}

[Infinitis]

[SIZE="4"]Staress~* Part One[/SIZE]
Ganre: Shojo/Comedy/Spiritual
Rating: PG-13

*:Updates? (Infinitis Character Update!! >o< My First Chaper is almost finished!! o_o ) :*
Comments are allowed on my Thread *nodnod* :3

I'm going to start on a old and dear story of mine.
If it's God's will, I would like this story to be a light in the world of today's stories of darkness and to those who are lost in this world.

Recently, I have been going through hard times in college. I feel so lost. I hardly have time to be creative and to be myself. Slowly, I felt a change in me, a deadly change. I've been praying alot if I should continue this silly story, but everytime I encounter a teacher or fellow artest, my passion for Staress grows stronger! I asked God to help me if this is my path to follow. And now, I'm trying it out! Here I go!!

This Thread will have all my updates:
All critisism is accepted! Well...please no flames... ;o;

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For those who are actually reading this...
[SIZE="3"]All my lovies goes to yas!! (~-.-)~[/SIZE]

[Infinitis]

Main Character #1:
Full Name: Infinitis Angelana Tranquillitis (Royal)
Called Name: Infinitis or Finny



Gender: Female
Age: 19
Blood Type: O
Likes: sweets, fun people, and other girly things
Dislikes: Disputes and being judgemental

Let me introduce you to the craziest congured up character of all Time! she's cute, cuddly, and ... curious? Yes, this chick was brought up thinking that you should "love" everyone, no matter what they've done. (this goes to be very intrasting when she meets Annon, my antagonist...)

That and... she forgets things...very easily. Only if it envolves a death of some kind. Her forgetful nature adds on to her happy-go-lucky nature that will inevidably make her seem like she's running away from any sort of problem, resulting in her child-like actions.

Forgive me if this is very confusing. My style for writing is developing the character through actions and circumstances.

I'll put the first chapter up soon so that my readers wont be confused as i think they are... *_*

[Infinitis]

My Beginning~~

Staress ~*
Part 1
COVER : The Royal Family of Tranquillia
Volume 1 : Berasheith

1- Map of Edonia: Tranquillia in center
2- Page of Contents:
3- Inkling for Staress: [SIZE="1"](The Magical little poem that helped to start it all!! xD )[/SIZE]
4- Chapter 1: We woke…

[align=center]5- Scene: Epic Form
(words in captions are illustrations)
In Our beginning
We woke prematurely
(A man wakes in shock)
And were Deafened
By a Fallen Star.
(A mysterious falling Star)
Darkness intruded
The hearts of Man,
(Hands over hearts, anguish)
Rendering us…
…helpless.

6- Scene: Epic shown more with illustration
Half of our people
Buried themselves
(People in the shadows)
In the Darkness,
(A hand on the edge)
While the others
(The man is hanging on a cliff)
Sought for a Promise…
(The man cries out in mourning)
“…from Abba, our Lord.â€

[Infinitis]

[SIZE="5"]Script of the 'first chapter' is up!![/SIZE]

http://www.christiananime.net/showthread.php?p=1219503#post1219503

Please Critique!! >______<

[MangArtist]

Wow! I'm likin' it!! I'M LIKIN' IT!!! I would give suggestions if I could, but I can't! I, seriously, can't find anything wrong with it! Wow! This will also help me with writing my manga script! I didn't have the slightest clue on how to write one. I'm really looking forward to reading this manga! Keep up the amazing work and God bless!:thumb:

Edit: Oops, am I suppossed to comment on a different thread?