FMA Fanfic: Raising Pride

[Lady Kenshin]

I'm sure many of you have heard of the BBI ending where Ed becomes a homunculus. This story attempts to put a new spin on that plot line.

Basically, the "Ed" created looks about five or six. The real Ed is on Earth at the time. Winry adopts the young facsimile. And... well, it's hard to summarize quickly because there's so much going on.

Please read it! I get a lot of good reviews, but I'd like some perspective from the people here. I have it published over on ff.net.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4198844/1/Raising_Pride

Tell me what you think!

[Mr. Hat'n'Clogs]

Very ineteresting, I've only read the first chapter, but you write very well.

Winry using alchemy? Interesting idea...

[Lady Kenshin]

Very ineteresting, I've only read the first chapter, but you write very well.

Winry using alchemy? Interesting idea...

Thank you!

[Ante Bellum]

I only read a few chapters into it, but I like the way it's coming along, as well as the use of such descriptive language.

[Lady Kenshin]

I only read a few chapters into it, but I like the way it's coming along, as well as the use of such descriptive language.

Thank you!