Dream High School (looking for feedback)

[MIBuddy]

Hey guys,

I've been working on a slice of life novel about a high schooler who takes night classes in a shared lucid dream. It's updated every Monday and Thursday, and readers get to vote on what your character does next. I'd love to hear your feedback; I'm hoping to start profiting from it in the next several months, so I really need to know if people are enjoying it!

You can read it here: http://dhs.storieslc.com/
(if you want to start on the last page, you can instead go to dhs.storieslc.com/index.html#15)

I don't know if you guys are more into action-adventure, but even if you are I'd be curious to hear your thoughts. It's a light read (the way I like it!).

Thanks!