~Identity~

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~Identity~

Postby Niko_Girl_Meow » Sun Aug 01, 2004 12:42 pm

Hi everyone! :angel: ^^ I've been working on this story for a long while. ^^ Hope you like it!
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Postby Niko_Girl_Meow » Sun Aug 01, 2004 12:43 pm

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Identity
BY:
Angela Mishler
Illustrations by:
Clarissa Merritt


[INDENT]~ Intro ~

[/INDENT]~This world is ‘Shiro’. It is a lovely peaceful planet. It is a planet like Earth, with horses, dogs, cats, humans, and such. But a big difference is the fact that Shiro has magic and advanced technology. For instance, there are dragons. But they were not huge, as big as a house type of dragons though. These fellows are about as long as a full-grown mans arm. But they were still incredibly useful. They are smart, can teleport at need, and can breathe small spurts of fire. But they are very rare. Also another example of magic is used for a royalties’ coronation. There is an orb that they put their hand on (Their right hand) as they say their oaths. It will glow if they are a proper ruler. That means, if the Prince or Princess won’t make a proper King or Queen, the orb won’t glow. If the Heir is unsuitable, the next in line goes. If there is only one heir, the Vizier takes over. Shiro has things such as lasers and spaceports, yet is still quite medieval in many aspects. For there were many castles, all with Kings, Queens, Princesses, Princes, and so on, and so forth. Those Palaces did however have electricity. But in the deep of space all was not calm. There were space pirates about, stealing from unsuspecting vacation spaceports. And all was not gold planet side either. For there were guilds. Guilds of thieves, assassins, and of course, the afore mentioned pirates. How many there are is unknown. ~
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Postby Niko_Girl_Meow » Sun Aug 01, 2004 12:44 pm

~ Guild Head Quarters ~

The Guild Master shifted yet again under the royal Vizier’s icy gaze. What did he want? He thought nervously. I mean, what do I have that he could want, or…is it something I did, and, why did he bring, Diablo…*Gulp* That is one evil looking dragon. Black with red eyes, and spikes. And those claws! “So what your saying is we’re going to do a switch?â€
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Postby Niko_Girl_Meow » Sun Aug 01, 2004 12:58 pm

ARGH! This place is not user freindly!!!!!!!!! :Angry:
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Postby Niko_Girl_Meow » Sun Aug 01, 2004 1:13 pm

~ Twenty Years Later ~

~ At Kitoke Palace Gardens ~

“SHIRA!!!!!â€
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Postby Niko_Girl_Meow » Sun Aug 01, 2004 1:16 pm

“Er, Tangard, please excuse me for a mere moment…â€
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Postby Niko_Girl_Meow » Sun Aug 01, 2004 1:18 pm

*Whew* Thats all for now. But I have 33 pages at least! ^^ But I can't indent! *Waah* This place is definitely NOT user friendly!
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Postby starstoryteller » Mon Aug 02, 2004 9:38 am

Hi ya keep it up
:comp: "Foul Beast"

Jesus is the Lord of the Kings

I love hypper people :hug:

"...art can teach without at all ceasing to be art."

"Love may forgive all infirmities and love still in spite of them: but Love cannot cease to will their removal."

"If I find in myself a desire which no experience in this world can satisfy, the most probable explanation is that I was made for another world."

the words of C.S. Lewis "Jack"
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Postby Niko_Girl_Meow » Tue Aug 03, 2004 11:11 pm

Hi.
Oh the Humanity!
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Postby Niko_Girl_Meow » Fri Aug 27, 2004 5:57 pm

~At the capital of Aloven~

Damian wandered on the street thinking were to go, after all he was not staying in the palace a second longer, he could not believe what Tangard just told him. Me married. He thought ruefully. He could have at least introduced me, but nooooo! He had to go BEHIND my back, and than just, announce that I am to marry some Princess, Mya, or something…I mean, if I was to ever get married (as if!) I would at least like to at least know the girl, and maybe even, perchance like her. But no! He goes behind my back! It’s as if he were planning to take over my kingdom or something. So that’s why I’m leaving, didn’t like it much there anyway. Too stuffy. I think I’ll head to the spaceport. Maybe I’ll be a pirate! That’ll be fun! Damian thought trying convince himself that what he was doing was not suicidal or stupid. While so deep in his not so deep thoughts, Damian was suddenly bumped into and almost fell.
“Hey!â€
Oh the Humanity!
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Postby Niko_Girl_Meow » Fri Aug 27, 2004 5:59 pm

Theres my next segment. hope you like it! I really have much more, but I'm just showing bits at a time.
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Postby Niko_Girl_Meow » Fri Aug 27, 2004 6:00 pm

Heres one more. ^^
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Postby Niko_Girl_Meow » Fri Aug 27, 2004 6:48 pm

~ Back at Kitoke Palace Gardens~

“You SO need to get out of here.â€
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Postby Niko_Girl_Meow » Fri Aug 27, 2004 6:51 pm

~ Aloven fields. On ground ~

“Really, wow.â€
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Postby Niko_Girl_Meow » Fri Aug 27, 2004 6:55 pm

“Well if you’re looking for the prince, don’t bother going to the castle. He’s here.â€
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Postby Niko_Girl_Meow » Fri Aug 27, 2004 6:56 pm

“She’s right you know.â€
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Postby Niko_Girl_Meow » Fri Aug 27, 2004 6:58 pm

Hope you like the story so far!
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Postby Niko_Girl_Meow » Sun Aug 29, 2004 4:36 pm

And if anyone is reading this, please post replies. ^^
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