A Poem - Wish

[Lengai]

For someone I've prayed for going on two years for, that he may find Christ.



Once upon a time
We sat under the stars
Your hand in mine
Together
Side by side

To you then I whispered
The burden of my heart
I shared all the things
I feared would tear us apart

I told you much
In such a short time
About praying for you
Until I cried

And cry I did
Into unsettled sleep
Dreaming again
Not of pain nor bliss
Just somewhere inbetween
It's your name I whisper
To the One I call King

In the stillness
For your safety I ask
And that someday you'll see
That someone called Jesus
Loves you just as much
As He's always loved me

After this long
In prayer for you
My spirit sometime shakes
And My hope sometimes breaks
Yet I shall always keep faith

I'll keep on praying
That someday you'll see
But until then
I'll just keep whispering your name
Quietly to the One I call King

[Waterlillee]

awwwwwwwwwwww~~
it's very sweet ^^
nicely written~^^
I hope everything goes okay
with that person~~

[Magekind]

An excellent piece of emotional and philosophical work.

[LostChild]

i hope that he comes to Jesus too, it sounds like you really care, keep it up! but just remember that what you have been doing is all you can do; the rest is up to him, and Christ.

[ice122985]

i know a little of how you feel, although it is a bit different in my case. but you put it very poetically. i liked it.

[shadowblade]

Beautiful piece! I'll pray for your friend. Just remember that there's always hope! ^_^