Voice of the Lost

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Voice of the Lost

Postby sonichiro » Wed Dec 29, 2004 5:31 pm

hi! i wrote this a couple of years ago when i was depressed, but God pulled me out of depression shortly after and i'm full of the joy of the holy spirit! it has a message so i thought i would post it. ^__^
Shall i deny the giver of life
Rebuke that spirit stand up and fight
Woe to the dead and praise to the life
Follow the voice and forget your strife
It is coming, the time we've all craved
The book has been opened judgement to the grave

I'm falling again, God take my hand
I'm lost and crying out in vain
Lord hear my call, before i fall
Father i'm so lost, rescue me

I'm drowning in lakes of uncertanty
The lies and the hate are too much for me
I'm crying and praying for souls lost in fear
Their voices too hurt, only i hear
I'll speak for you, you will be heard in the end
Your warnings of truth to the world i will send

I'm falling again, God take my hand
I'm lost and crying out in vain
Lord hear my call, before i fall
Father i'm so lost, rescue me

Waves of depression choke at my throat
Screaming inside, praying to float
Walking threw waters consumed by tears
Follow the light, forget your fears
Voices echo inside my head
God give me life, don't leave me for dead
-- if white was black and black was white, what of shades of grey?
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Postby Magekind » Thu Dec 30, 2004 2:47 pm

Very nice.
Take it like you gave it; what else matters in the end? To be honest, it's all a one-shot test; that leaves plenty of places to go wrong, but how will you ever know? There's a pointer, I will admit. Turn it on, listen to it, feel it burn.

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Postby sanitysux13 » Thu Dec 30, 2004 3:42 pm

Dude, that's awesome. If you play music, or know someone who does, you should try to make that into a song.
The Battles Over My Heart Moves On
I Kept My Mouth
While You Screamed And Cried
All The Lies, All The Lies
The Battle's Over
My Heart Moves On
Stood And Took The Arrows
That Cut Through My Heart
I Stood Alone I Stood Alone

You Broke Down All My Walls
I'll Build Them Up Again
The Battle's Over
Now My Heart Moves On
Today I Stand To Watch You Fall
Thats Just To Say I've Had Enough
Not Even You Can Stop Me Now
My Heart Moves On
Can't Stop Me Now
My Heart Moves On

-"The Closest Thing to Closure", Haste the Day
{In memory of a certain ex-best friend,
to whom I recently re-became friends with;
but it's still a cool song.}


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Emery: Why do you dress like that?
Me: Like what?
Emery: Well, you know, in all black with all those strappy things on your pants, like you're depressed.
Me: Cuz I like it. Why do you dress like that?
Emery: Like what?
Me: Like you're all preppy and happy looking.

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Postby sonichiro » Thu Dec 30, 2004 6:24 pm

thanks, i've been thinking of making them song lyrics.....i'm still not sure yet tho. ^__^
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Postby Cedahlia » Thu Dec 30, 2004 11:26 pm

That was wonderful! ^__^ You have alot of talent! And that would make a wonderful song.
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Postby girlninja » Sun Jan 02, 2005 11:05 am

heh thinkin on the same for the song lyrics i think it would go well with alternative music if you like that sorta thing ^^
also beautiful poem i also understand teh grips of depression, how hard they are to overcome and how they sometimes come to grip again ^^ but i do wish you to keep writing poems that God has given you the new hope to write ^^ Out of our mouths ring his joyous Praise ^^ keep writing!
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Postby sonichiro » Sun Jan 02, 2005 1:18 pm

^__^
-- if white was black and black was white, what of shades of grey?
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Postby LostChild » Sun Jan 02, 2005 7:28 pm

i agree, great song lyrics! when/ if it ever gets made into a song, let me know, k? :thumb:
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Postby sonichiro » Sun Jan 02, 2005 9:09 pm

sure thing! there actually is one more verse to this thing but i can't find the origional copy of it!! i posted this from memory and decided not to add the last verse because i couldnt find the sheet, now i really wanna post the rest of it!
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Postby LostChild » Mon Jan 03, 2005 9:46 pm

well, when u find it, post it ASAP!!!! ^ ^ i can't wait!
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