just something i was working on

[funnyvalentine]

i got this idea last year, jotted down a short intro but never finished it...let me know if i should keep going or drop it(be truthful i take criticism well).

Happy. She was happy. Happier then she could ever remember herself being. She smiled as she felt a chill breeze pick up, ruffling her hair. She gazed down at the lifeless bloody carcass at her feet. Yes, She was happy indeed.
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:Chapter 1:
The hollow sound of foot steps could be heard down the long corridor. A figure stirred slightly in the shadows. Doors opened to reveal a man clothed in black walk through the archway toward a figure sitting on a throne. The man knelt before the figure.
“What is it you wish to speak to me about, my lord?â€

[uc pseudonym]

Well, it certainly has potential. You could take this a lot of places, and I won't try to surmise where you're going with it. Witchcraft/anything involving demons is always tricky to work with, but I don't believe there's anything wrong with it. Please, continue. Out of curiosity, though, where are you getting your information? Regardles the answer, spoken or unspoken, I'd warn you to watch your step out of concern for you.

[Lightbringer]

and pray too. Never ever underestimate the power of prayer. If your going to work with those kind of themes, i BEG you to pray. Plead the blood, and pray for direction. And i'll pray too. "The fervent and affection prayers of a righteous man ( and woman) availeth much."

Lightbringer // Aaron

[funnyvalentine]

what do you mean where am i getting my information?
anyway yeah if i do decided to write more i'll definetely be careful and pray about it.

[uc pseudonym]

Ah, pardon my obscurity. I meant: where are you getting your information about satanic rituals and the like?

By the way, nice avatar. I don't really like Faye, but I like your avatar anyway. That says something.

[funnyvalentine]

Oh uh i haven't really taken the idea seriously so i haven't researched anything yet.
And thanks, i like your avatar too...Sephiroth(sp?) i think?

[uc pseudonym]

Thanks. Yeah, you got the spelling right.

However you decide to handle the issue (research or no) do so carefully, like we've said. If you really want information, I suppose I could supply you with stuff (I never thought I'd be saying that). But if you want to go that route, do so over private messeges.

[majanthehun]

uc and everyone else is absolutley right... that satanic stuff will affect you even if you're not getting information becasue you want to take part in the rituals and all that la... i know too many people who thought they were just exploring and ended up in some deep stuff...

be careful as you study, i'm sure we'll be praying for you...

[funnyvalentine]

i think people are getting the wrong impression here...
i in know way am "dabbling" in satanic crap. I am a christian. I just thought it would be interesting to have demons in my story...like frank peretti writes books with spiritual warfare...
just making sure i'm clearing stuff up here.

[uc pseudonym]

There appears to have been misunderstandings on both sides. I can speak for myself, but I understood that you have nothing to do with anything Satanic. But any research into the field can be dangerous. We're not accusing you in any way. Just concerned in advance for your spiritual safety.

[kaibrightwing]

That was interesting, i what to see what happens nexts. Demons? cool using demons and magic is great for stories the trick is how you use it the story that makes it interesting most of my stories use magic and demons for my fantasy stories or use mecha in my sci-fi stories so please contiune.