Myoti wrote:Elementary, my dear Watsoph. XD
Myoti wrote:Elementary, my dear Watsoph. XD
Myoti wrote:Elementary, my dear Watsoph. XD
Photosoph wrote:"Oh lay off him Tresa, Teresa or T'resa, maybe?
Photosoph wrote:I like the continuity with Tori and the hotdogs ("(Tori pulled out a hot dog)"). Very creative, funny writing. I'm enjoying it.
really? hmm... i thought it was more like T-reh-sah, without the "eh" sound right after the "T." but then again, you're the author, not me! which would be a good thing...SorasOathkeeper wrote:Teressa is Tee-re-sa and Tresa is Teh-re-sa
SorasOathkeeper wrote:Blade walked onto the deck and headed towards Spikes room. He opened the door and walked in. It was pitch black with a single candle on the table as it always was. He walked over to the window seat where Spike was laying. She had a cloth over her eyes and her hand on her fore head.
"Not feeling well?" Blade asked coldly.
She moaned. "Shut up, ugh...Shut up you stupid toad face!"
{i'm assuming that Spike is the one throwing out insults...}
Blade scoffed. "Is that the best insult you can think of?"
She rubbed her head. "You know what days like this can do to me. Stupid sun, I hate it, it's so darn bright." Spike complained. Blade sat down next to her. He took the cloth off her head and wetted in a bucket of water and placed it on her forehead.
"It's supposed to go like that. Not on your eyes."
"Shut up you idiot, I knew that. I was keeping it on my eyes to keep the light from under the door from bothering me."
"The light bothers your eyes that much?" She sat up slightly and pulled the blanket over her shoulders.
"Bright light like this does. The darn heat too. I don't understand how you people can stand it."
Blade shrugged. "Your eyes are just more sensitive then ours." She glared at him.
"No duh Einstein!" She pulled the blanket over her head.
"Teressa!" Blade looked over in the corner as Teressa emerged.
LostChild wrote:really? hmm... i thought it was more like T-reh-sah, without the "eh" sound right after the "T." but then again, you're the author, not me! which would be a good thing...
LostChild wrote:very nice! so... what happens next? Spike gets mad and shoots lazers out of her eyes, and that's why they hurt so much? hehehe.
Myoti wrote:Elementary, my dear Watsoph. XD
Photosoph wrote:Eek! New avvie! So cute that snake is! My english be getting bad with all the overload of the cuteness affecting my brain the. >_O Gah! *bashes head against the wall -the usual affect of such cuteness.* Did you make it yourself -or where did you find it?
LostChild wrote:you wrote the wrong?
Myoti wrote:Elementary, my dear Watsoph. XD
Myoti wrote:Elementary, my dear Watsoph. XD
Myoti wrote:Elementary, my dear Watsoph. XD
Myoti wrote:Elementary, my dear Watsoph. XD
SorasOathkeeper wrote:Yeah, I've been typing way too much. The wrong THING. There all better. Are you happy now Lost?
SorasOathkeeper wrote:"OK! Brandon you have been placed under me, so....." Brandon stared at Blade waiting for him to continue. "YOU GOT TO DO WHAT I SAY!!!" Blade shouted joyfully, as Brandon fell to the floor on his hand and knees. Blade looked down at him.
"What's wrong?" Blade asked. Brandon stared at the floor.
"I just saw my whole life flash before my eyes...." Blade laughed and pulled him up. { _ _ }
"Don't worry everything will be fine!" Blade smacked him on the back as a friendly gesture but did it too hard, knocking him down.
"Sorry buddy!" Blade laughed.
SorasOathkeeper wrote:As the next several hours went by, Brandon went around running errands for the crew as they waited for any sign of the wind. Brandon climbed up to the crows nest {i'm wondering if that should be capitalized? i dunno, but that should be something *cough cough* "researched" } hoping to hide from Blade. He peeked over the edge and looked at Tori.
"HI BRANDON!!!" She chirped happily. Brandon smiled but put a finger to his lips.
"I'm hiding from Blade." She looked at him confused.
"Like Hide n' Seek?" He nodded. “Yeah like that, but different." She thought for a second.
"Okay, so Seek n' Hide!" She exclaimed happily. Brandon nodded.
"I guess so." Tori smiled and a Seagull landed on her hat.
"So Tori, how did you and the others come to be on this ship?" She leaned back (against the railing).
"Well not all of us came at the same time. Spike, Blade and Teressa were here before all the rest of us. We were people Spike brought on board. Xzander and I were brought on at the same time." {when? first? in the middle? the last ones? suggest background info.}
"Which one is Xzander?" Brandon asked]'re[/B] very different. By the way, how old is Spike?" Brandon asked moving closer.
"Eighteen, Why?" Tori asked. Brandon shrugged.
"Well the stories of the Dragon's Mist go back for over a hundred years, and that means that Spike would have to be over one hundred years old." Tori thought for a moment.
"Well maybe it takes a long time for her to age." Tori said giving off a dumb look. {shrugging her shoulders/ rolling her eyes maybe?}
"You mean you don't even know?" Tori shook her head.
"We don't ask that kind of stuff here."
{i think...} Brandon looked down at his hand.
Myoti wrote:Elementary, my dear Watsoph. XD
Myoti wrote:Elementary, my dear Watsoph. XD
Blade walked towards the door to go inside of the ship and turned towards Zell.
"Hey Zell you going to come for dinner?" Zell shook his head.
"I'm not in the mood for Tresa's death food. And besides I got to turn the big wheel here and make the ship go!" Blade shook his head.
"You mean steer the ship?" Zell nodded.
"Yeah that’s what I said."
"....Whatever floats your boat." Blade rolled his eyes.
"Wood!" Zell yelled as Blade walked into the ship.
Myoti wrote:Elementary, my dear Watsoph. XD
Myoti wrote:Elementary, my dear Watsoph. XD
Myoti wrote:Elementary, my dear Watsoph. XD
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