A Poem

[Silent Hunter]

Well, I wrote this a while back, and JadeFox encouraged me to post it so _ -


My Prayer
I see and try again to grasp,
This life you’ve given me,
So willingly, you died that day,
So I could be set free.

How could you love me? I have sinned,
No, I’m not worthy Lord,
Yet still you love and care for me,
Why should I gain reward?

Through blinding tears I come to you,
And in your arms I’m held,
I confess yet one more sin,
You say that all is well.

Thank you, Lord, Oh, thank you, Lord,
For all that you have done,
I never could repay you, so,
For now this race I run.

To you, all glory I now give,
You know I deserve none,
For when I get to heaven,
You will count what I have done.

And when my name is called by you,
I will fall down at your feet,
For never a moment will there be,
That could ever be so sweet.

[Da Rabid Duckie]

I'd say you have a poem on your hands. *snaps fingers*

Is there a school competition you can enter that in, or something?

[Silent Hunter]

I'm not sure ... I've never really done poetry and this was my first real try.

[Ssjjvash]

hey, if you wanna do something with that poem, check this website out:
http://www.utmostchristianwriters.com/utmost.htm

I submitted a poem to them recently. The contest is coming to a close soon though.

Anyway, that is a really good poem! It's so true....

[creed4]

pertty good, keep it up.