A poem of mine

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A poem of mine

Postby Artist4Jesus89 » Sat Jan 21, 2006 6:58 pm

Just a poem i had to get out my feeling so i decided to post it here its not supposed to like be good or anything i just feel this way ;_;
and this is to my ex friend brittany k

More than this:
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to Brittany Kennedy

There are times in your life when you just need to get away living seems hopeless and just a price to pay things running through your mind now things you can explain but through this midst of it all something in you screams.
There has got to be more than this why shouldnt there be more than this!
You try to find that thing you crave the thing thats will save you from your cave.
You try all that you can running from drugs and alcohol to cutting and burning.
Although you have tried this a thoushand times it seems your still not learning.
Then once again something in starts yearning.
There has got to be more than this why shouldnt there be more than this!
That something you are looking for you know youve had it before but you dont want to turn away from being in the crowd you love the highs but yet you find nothing is as it was when you found your true love.
Girl there is only one thing i want to say to you dont forget Jesus loves you too you cant give up just because you love the world.
Girl i KNOW that it is hard i am livin in the same world as you are but still it only takes one decision to live just for Christ and turn from sin and live right.
I know you think im a goody good but thats just fine with me if you ever read this i just want you to know...
God loves you more than anyone could ever love you.
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Postby Lyrical » Sun Jan 22, 2006 9:36 am

aw...that's really nice. i'm not poetic myself. and gosh. i don't have the ability to make poems that long.
"My blackest days were bandaged white I prayed upon my darkest night,
and bible dreams the lives of former whores.
I slept beside this angry calm, kept faith alive and far from harm,
torn I�ve lived, I�ll die a boy stillborn. " -Bible dreams, The Wild Swans


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Postby Stephen » Sun Jan 22, 2006 12:09 pm

Moved to the writing board.
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Postby Mr. SmartyPants » Wed Jan 25, 2006 4:09 am

That's good stuff there =D
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