Black Wine

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Black Wine

Postby Sakura's Wings » Tue Feb 21, 2006 5:05 pm

Just so every one knows, this poem is about Satan (represented by Black Wine) and all the horrible things he does. One of my Very close friends is Satanist, and i need prayer to let me know how to help him and for him to see God.

Black Wine

Black Wine is your poision, your sin, is your hate
But it has the ingridient that makes it so you can’t taste
Black Wine is your religion, your mask, is your faith
The one who makes your drink makes it so you can’t think

Others around you know you should quit
they know it controlls you
You think you’re through with it
In reality youre not, and reality never lies
If you continue to drink your Black Wine
you’ll die alone in a world of lies

You’ve become a part of the Wine, of this poision, this mix
Once you’re too far in, it becomes something you cannot fix
The Black Wine will kill you from the inside out
And alone you’ll die, with no way out

You’re trapped in a room with no windows, no doors
You’re suspended, harnessed, with 9-inch nails for floors
The chains will release you, from one torture to the next
You’ll never be set free, your destiny forever set

You’d never again have anyone at your side
no one to comfort or hold you on this wild ride
You’re all alone, your fate eternally sealed
Black Wine has taken over, you’ll never be healed.

So drop your goblet of Dark Black Wine,
Spill the poision to the floor, you are now released
Your shackles turn to dust
Bound no more you will be

Black Wine no longer controlls you, you now are free
You have loved ones at your side and alone you’ll never be
because you’ve left your deadly Black Wine
Kerima, She-elf of the forest

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DO THE KIRBY!! :grin:

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Postby Naga Kisaki » Tue Feb 21, 2006 5:12 pm

Wow.... That's very good, but frightening. And it exspresses the truth, Black Wine is a perfect metaphor for satan's lies.


I'll pray for your friend.
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Postby Sakura's Wings » Tue Feb 21, 2006 5:19 pm

thank you so much. i have also posted more explanation in the Prayer Room under a title called Prayer for a friend in serious need of God
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Postby Anna Mae » Tue Feb 21, 2006 6:22 pm

Good. It expresses the truth well.
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Postby Warrior 4 Jesus » Tue Feb 21, 2006 10:04 pm

Wow, that's really dark and well written and clearly shows what life with out God would be like. How do you write this stuff? I'll be praying for your friend Sakura's Wings.
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Postby Sakura's Wings » Thu Mar 09, 2006 4:26 pm

honestly, i dont know ho i wright this stuff, it just comes, but i had to work on it a bit
thank you so much!
Kerima, She-elf of the forest

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DO THE KIRBY!! :grin:

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Starfire1
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Postby Sakura's Wings » Sun Mar 19, 2006 1:38 pm

btw, if anyone hasd any suggestions for a Godly wine poesm, please let me know
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Postby Anna Mae » Mon Mar 20, 2006 11:49 am

What would you call that? White wine to represent purity? Red wine to represent Jesus' blood? That's interesting. I will think on that.
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“My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:
look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!â€
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Postby Warrior 4 Jesus » Mon Mar 20, 2006 11:52 pm

Anna Mae, sound's very Ted Dekkerish.
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Postby Sakura's Wings » Tue Mar 21, 2006 3:19 pm

actually i was thinking either one of those, not sure yet
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DO THE KIRBY!! :grin:

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Postby Anna Mae » Thu Mar 23, 2006 1:48 pm

Warrior 4 Jesus wrote:Anna Mae, sound's very Ted Dekkerish.
I do not understand.
[SIZE="4"][color="DarkSlateBlue"]God has called me to mission work in Paraguay and Brazil. I may return to CAA someday. God bless all of you![/color][/SIZE]

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“My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:
look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!â€
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