The Rain of blood

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The Rain of blood

Postby kaibrightwing » Mon Jan 12, 2004 4:25 am

A boisterous call came from the front of the house. " Mother, mother!" As steps came up to the front shoji opened with a loud thud. A young girl with her long silky black hair floating as she ran into the house calling for her mother.
she turned toward the veranda to find her seating at a small table reading a scroll her head was down covering her elegant kimono with red and gold with the pattern of flames and on the back of it was a golden on of the phoenix clan, it was so beautiful she couldn't help staring for a moment until she remember what she was doing.
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I n September of 2012 Megaroad-01 was launched with an escort of fleet of zentraedi warships. From that point on the mass-production of the Megaroad -class colony ship began and soon long-range colony fleets were routinely being launched from earth solar system at a rate of 1-2 per year.
In September of 2022 Megaroad-19 colony ship with it’s escort fleet left earth and headed south fifteen degrees to the right of the southern star. On a mission with three objection; One to search for a planet to colonize, two to see what the rim of the galaxy looks like, three to see if any zentraedi fleets are out there. On July 21, 2025 Megaroad-19 entered its ninth star system and named it the sierra system.
Orbiting the third planet is an asteroid that was some ten miles in size, and a moon that was named Karla.
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Postby churchgirl111 » Mon Jan 12, 2004 6:43 pm

i don't mean to sound rude or anything i truly truly don't....would you mind seperating into paragraphs it woulud make the story a little easier to read...Please don't take offense only making a suggestion..
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Postby Fsiphskilm » Mon Jan 12, 2004 6:56 pm

Interesting...Mythical,
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Postby kaibrightwing » Mon Jan 12, 2004 7:05 pm

I tried to put it into paragraphs but it seem this message board disappovors of paragrapgs.
I n September of 2012 Megaroad-01 was launched with an escort of fleet of zentraedi warships. From that point on the mass-production of the Megaroad -class colony ship began and soon long-range colony fleets were routinely being launched from earth solar system at a rate of 1-2 per year.
In September of 2022 Megaroad-19 colony ship with it’s escort fleet left earth and headed south fifteen degrees to the right of the southern star. On a mission with three objection; One to search for a planet to colonize, two to see what the rim of the galaxy looks like, three to see if any zentraedi fleets are out there. On July 21, 2025 Megaroad-19 entered its ninth star system and named it the sierra system.
Orbiting the third planet is an asteroid that was some ten miles in size, and a moon that was named Karla.
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