So this is my poetry, folks. I hope you enjoy.
Signed,
Zarn.
"The song of the StormCrow..."
This Crow Flies South
Storm is raging outside.
What is in the midst of it?
Who dares to fly?
It is the STORMCROW...
Child of Thunder, Brother to Lightning, A companion to the Winds...
See how he battles with the storm, flying straight into its heart.
How does he fly with such winds about him? How does he survive?
It is in his blood...For he must fly, Fly with his other-self, fly with the storm...
For to fly in the midst of the tempest is his Destiny.
Arashi no Tenshi, Blood of Ancient Storm, Master of black wings, Fly.
Kiss the Storm Maiden, embrace the bitter showers. Race the Clouds, touch the Stars,
And finally, Finally...Find Home.
The Song of the Stormcrow...Flight without Wings, Sight without Eyes, Tell all truth, Banish all Lies.
My Poetry Thread: Of Joy and Disconsolation...
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My Poetry Thread: Of Joy and Disconsolation...
With your doubt, all is comfort
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
- Zarn Ishtare
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wow, when I first started reading that I was like "huh? O.o" and then I finished and it all falls into place and makes sense. I liked it and really enjoyed reading it. Awesome imagry and word usage. ^_^
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6( . )9
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This [color=royalblue]is Monkee![/color]
Loveth Teh Monkee!
°(O.o)°
6( . )9
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This [color=royalblue]is Monkee![/color]
Loveth Teh Monkee!
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Kry - Posts: 32
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Very mystical in its description. Rhyme scheme is a little odd but I think it works. Hrmmm...maybe I should post my stuff on this forum.
You may or may not have noticed Norse overtones, but it's not really based on any legends. It is merely something I wrote. Now, as to what inspired me....
Who can say?
Who can say?
With your doubt, all is comfort
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
- Zarn Ishtare
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Interesting... very mysticy.
What does 'Arashi no Tenshi' mean?
What does 'Arashi no Tenshi' mean?
[SIZE="4"][color="DarkSlateBlue"]God has called me to mission work in Paraguay and Brazil. I may return to CAA someday. God bless all of you![/color][/SIZE]
[i]Two vast and trunk-less legs of stone stand in the desert. Near them, on the sand, half sunk, a shattered visage lies. Round the decay of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare the lone and level sands stretch far away. On the pedestal these words are inscribed:
“My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:
look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!â€
[i]Two vast and trunk-less legs of stone stand in the desert. Near them, on the sand, half sunk, a shattered visage lies. Round the decay of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare the lone and level sands stretch far away. On the pedestal these words are inscribed:
“My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:
look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!â€
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Anna Mae - Posts: 1663
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Arashi-Tempest
Tenshi-Angel
So, Arashi No Tenshi-Angel of Storms.
Tenshi-Angel
So, Arashi No Tenshi-Angel of Storms.
With your doubt, all is comfort
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
- Zarn Ishtare
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You really captured everything very well. I really liked the passage "Kiss the Storm Maiden, embrace the bitter showers." I felt like I was swept away with this one, seeing what the Crow was seeing. Really, really good.
DO YOU FLY FOR FUN?!
I give props to these ANIMEs/MANGAs: GRAVE OF THE FIREFLIES, AZUMANGA DAIOH, MONSTER, SAILOR MOON SERIES, AKAGE NO ANNE, BOTTLE FAIRY, MY NEIGHBOR TOTORO, HOWL'S MOVING CASTLE, PARANOIA AGENT, YAKITATE!! JAPAN, UTAWARERUMONO, KANON, FULL MOON WO SAGASHITE, & YOTSUBA&!
LINKSQUEST's PASSIONS are: READING (especially books by authors: Lois Lowry, L.M. Montgomery, Ray Bradbury, C.S. Lewis) WRITING, SINGING, ACTING, COMPOSING, PIANO, PHOTOGRAPHY, ART, COOKING, MYST series, ZELDA series,OLD TIME RADIO , New Time Radio, SPANISH, LANGUAGES, and the list goes on.
Unlucky Secret Bump Thread Member #13
"WITH GREAT POWER COMES GREAT ENERGY BILLS!"
I give props to these ANIMEs/MANGAs: GRAVE OF THE FIREFLIES, AZUMANGA DAIOH, MONSTER, SAILOR MOON SERIES, AKAGE NO ANNE, BOTTLE FAIRY, MY NEIGHBOR TOTORO, HOWL'S MOVING CASTLE, PARANOIA AGENT, YAKITATE!! JAPAN, UTAWARERUMONO, KANON, FULL MOON WO SAGASHITE, & YOTSUBA&!
LINKSQUEST's PASSIONS are: READING (especially books by authors: Lois Lowry, L.M. Montgomery, Ray Bradbury, C.S. Lewis) WRITING, SINGING, ACTING, COMPOSING, PIANO, PHOTOGRAPHY, ART, COOKING, MYST series, ZELDA series,OLD TIME RADIO , New Time Radio, SPANISH, LANGUAGES, and the list goes on.
Unlucky Secret Bump Thread Member #13
"WITH GREAT POWER COMES GREAT ENERGY BILLS!"
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Linksquest - Posts: 1859
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I sense a deep symbalism in this, kinda like a one of C.S. Lewis's books, the bird flying threw a twisted destructive storm, trying to find its way home. is this tied in with expressing the struggles we face in life and how were constantly under fire in this world until we finnally get home? or am I just digging WAY to deep >.>;;;
"But I tell you that anyone that looks at a woman lustfully has already commited adultury with her in his heart"
(Matt. 5:28)
"But God demonstrates his own love for us in this: While we were still sinners, Christ died for us."
(Romans 5:8)
"Jesus answered, "I am the way and the truth and the life. No one comes to the Father except through me.""
(John 14:6)
A child who is allowed to be disrespectful to his parents will not have true respect for anyone.
~Billy Graham
God proved His love on the Cross. When Christ hung, and bled, and died, it was God saying to the world, "I love you."
~Billy Graham
http://www.brainyquote.com/quotes/authors/b/bil
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(X.X) <--da bunny is dead!!!
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(Matt. 5:28)
"But God demonstrates his own love for us in this: While we were still sinners, Christ died for us."
(Romans 5:8)
"Jesus answered, "I am the way and the truth and the life. No one comes to the Father except through me.""
(John 14:6)
A child who is allowed to be disrespectful to his parents will not have true respect for anyone.
~Billy Graham
God proved His love on the Cross. When Christ hung, and bled, and died, it was God saying to the world, "I love you."
~Billy Graham
http://www.brainyquote.com/quotes/authors/b/bil
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(X.X) <--da bunny is dead!!!
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allpayedatcross - Posts: 30
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Deep and not deep enough.
With your doubt, all is comfort
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
- Zarn Ishtare
- Posts: 1295
- Joined: Wed Feb 11, 2004 4:23 am
- Location: HELL HATH NO FURY, AT ALL.
-wants to know how much deeper, or to know how deep this is/what it represents-
"But I tell you that anyone that looks at a woman lustfully has already commited adultury with her in his heart"
(Matt. 5:28)
"But God demonstrates his own love for us in this: While we were still sinners, Christ died for us."
(Romans 5:8)
"Jesus answered, "I am the way and the truth and the life. No one comes to the Father except through me.""
(John 14:6)
A child who is allowed to be disrespectful to his parents will not have true respect for anyone.
~Billy Graham
God proved His love on the Cross. When Christ hung, and bled, and died, it was God saying to the world, "I love you."
~Billy Graham
http://www.brainyquote.com/quotes/authors/b/bil
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(X.X) <--da bunny is dead!!!
(> <)
(Matt. 5:28)
"But God demonstrates his own love for us in this: While we were still sinners, Christ died for us."
(Romans 5:8)
"Jesus answered, "I am the way and the truth and the life. No one comes to the Father except through me.""
(John 14:6)
A child who is allowed to be disrespectful to his parents will not have true respect for anyone.
~Billy Graham
God proved His love on the Cross. When Christ hung, and bled, and died, it was God saying to the world, "I love you."
~Billy Graham
http://www.brainyquote.com/quotes/authors/b/bil
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(X.X) <--da bunny is dead!!!
(> <)
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allpayedatcross - Posts: 30
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Welll....nope.
so sorry.
so sorry.
With your doubt, all is comfort
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
- Zarn Ishtare
- Posts: 1295
- Joined: Wed Feb 11, 2004 4:23 am
- Location: HELL HATH NO FURY, AT ALL.
awwww......why not? 
"But I tell you that anyone that looks at a woman lustfully has already commited adultury with her in his heart"
(Matt. 5:28)
"But God demonstrates his own love for us in this: While we were still sinners, Christ died for us."
(Romans 5:8)
"Jesus answered, "I am the way and the truth and the life. No one comes to the Father except through me.""
(John 14:6)
A child who is allowed to be disrespectful to his parents will not have true respect for anyone.
~Billy Graham
God proved His love on the Cross. When Christ hung, and bled, and died, it was God saying to the world, "I love you."
~Billy Graham
http://www.brainyquote.com/quotes/authors/b/bil
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(X.X) <--da bunny is dead!!!
(> <)
(Matt. 5:28)
"But God demonstrates his own love for us in this: While we were still sinners, Christ died for us."
(Romans 5:8)
"Jesus answered, "I am the way and the truth and the life. No one comes to the Father except through me.""
(John 14:6)
A child who is allowed to be disrespectful to his parents will not have true respect for anyone.
~Billy Graham
God proved His love on the Cross. When Christ hung, and bled, and died, it was God saying to the world, "I love you."
~Billy Graham
http://www.brainyquote.com/quotes/authors/b/bil
(\_/)
(X.X) <--da bunny is dead!!!
(> <)
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allpayedatcross - Posts: 30
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...I like it, it is pretty good...the talk of the crow being related to the elements was nice.
Jeremiah 29:11-"For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord,"plans to prosper you and not to harm you, plans to give you hope and a future."
"All the world's a stage and all the men and women merely players; they have their entrances and their exits and one man in his time plays many parts."-Will Shakespeare
@)}~ carry this rose in your sig, as thanks, to all the CAA Moderators
"All the world's a stage and all the men and women merely players; they have their entrances and their exits and one man in his time plays many parts."-Will Shakespeare
@)}~ carry this rose in your sig, as thanks, to all the CAA Moderators
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Phantom_Sorano - Posts: 909
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Because, sometimes people write poetry to discuss feelings they cannot share otherwise...
And it defeats the mystery of the poem.
And it defeats the mystery of the poem.
With your doubt, all is comfort
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
- Zarn Ishtare
- Posts: 1295
- Joined: Wed Feb 11, 2004 4:23 am
- Location: HELL HATH NO FURY, AT ALL.
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