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Postby soul alive » Fri May 26, 2006 11:17 pm

I'm [finally] getting started on drawing my web-manga, and I could really use some help with script editing from a person or two. I tend to be overly critical about some things; and I miss problems because I get too attached to an idea, until it is too late. So a second pair of eyes would be appreciated.

What I need is someone able to help catch potential flaws in the storyline and make sure that my grammar and spelling are correct.

And if it is not too much of a hassle, I really need this as soon as possible, as I would like to get to work drawing as quickly as I can.

Thanks.
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Postby Anna Mae » Sat May 27, 2006 9:18 am

I am not an English major or über experienced in web-manga, but I would be happy to help.
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Postby soul alive » Sat May 27, 2006 8:35 pm

Oh, thank you. How would you prefer for me to get you the script? PM or email?
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Postby uc pseudonym » Sat May 27, 2006 10:39 pm

If you like, I could probably do basic copyediting, provided that you don't try to overwhelm me with scripts. I'd prefer e-mail, and I can send you one if you want my help.
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Postby soul alive » Sun May 28, 2006 5:43 am

uc, I would definately like your help. Don't worry about me throwing a bunch of scripts at you, I only have one chapter done so far and probably won't have the next done for a few weeks.

I think I have enough help now, unless someone really wants to help. Thanks for the quick responses.
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Postby uc pseudonym » Sun May 28, 2006 9:24 am

I sent an e-mail to the account you registered with. If you use a different one, PM me, but otherwise you can just send it back to my account.
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Postby soul alive » Sun May 28, 2006 10:16 am

Got it, and sent reply with the script attached.
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