this is a poem I wrote when I was really caught in a haze and felt miserable.....although the tone is generally depressing theirs a suprise at the end waiting for you. Tell me what ya think.
CENSORSHIP WARNING: Somewhat gory
CONFLICT
Darkness on the inside, beyond my control
must fight it, the darkness deep within
the dark energies that ravage my soul
all these things that drown me in sin
must fight them, must win
cannot fail now, cannot give in
knives and swords pierce my skin
blood seeps out,
as though from a water spout,
incapable of holding on
oh how i need the son
the holy one, the only one
Desperate here I lay,
please Lord show me the way,
I've done you many a wrong yes that is true
but i know you can make all things new.........
please bring me back to your grace
that i may stand in your holy place
standing in you complete........
please cast down your saving rope
so that my end may be one of......
HOPE
Conflict-Hope
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Conflict-Hope
"But I tell you that anyone that looks at a woman lustfully has already commited adultury with her in his heart"
(Matt. 5:28)
"But God demonstrates his own love for us in this: While we were still sinners, Christ died for us."
(Romans 5:8)
"Jesus answered, "I am the way and the truth and the life. No one comes to the Father except through me.""
(John 14:6)
A child who is allowed to be disrespectful to his parents will not have true respect for anyone.
~Billy Graham
God proved His love on the Cross. When Christ hung, and bled, and died, it was God saying to the world, "I love you."
~Billy Graham
http://www.brainyquote.com/quotes/authors/b/bil
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(Matt. 5:28)
"But God demonstrates his own love for us in this: While we were still sinners, Christ died for us."
(Romans 5:8)
"Jesus answered, "I am the way and the truth and the life. No one comes to the Father except through me.""
(John 14:6)
A child who is allowed to be disrespectful to his parents will not have true respect for anyone.
~Billy Graham
God proved His love on the Cross. When Christ hung, and bled, and died, it was God saying to the world, "I love you."
~Billy Graham
http://www.brainyquote.com/quotes/authors/b/bil
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(X.X) <--da bunny is dead!!!
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allpayedatcross - Posts: 30
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Good message. Is it intentional that the last line is formatted like a title?
[SIZE="4"][color="DarkSlateBlue"]God has called me to mission work in Paraguay and Brazil. I may return to CAA someday. God bless all of you![/color][/SIZE]
[i]Two vast and trunk-less legs of stone stand in the desert. Near them, on the sand, half sunk, a shattered visage lies. Round the decay of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare the lone and level sands stretch far away. On the pedestal these words are inscribed:
“My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:
look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!â€
[i]Two vast and trunk-less legs of stone stand in the desert. Near them, on the sand, half sunk, a shattered visage lies. Round the decay of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare the lone and level sands stretch far away. On the pedestal these words are inscribed:
“My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:
look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!â€
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Anna Mae - Posts: 1663
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actually it is, I kinda did that to sorta like end a chapter, it moved from Conflict to Hope.....If anyhing by my resoning they should appear with the same status.
Thanks for the compliment! I appreciate it!
Thanks for the compliment! I appreciate it!
"But I tell you that anyone that looks at a woman lustfully has already commited adultury with her in his heart"
(Matt. 5:28)
"But God demonstrates his own love for us in this: While we were still sinners, Christ died for us."
(Romans 5:8)
"Jesus answered, "I am the way and the truth and the life. No one comes to the Father except through me.""
(John 14:6)
A child who is allowed to be disrespectful to his parents will not have true respect for anyone.
~Billy Graham
God proved His love on the Cross. When Christ hung, and bled, and died, it was God saying to the world, "I love you."
~Billy Graham
http://www.brainyquote.com/quotes/authors/b/bil
(\_/)
(X.X) <--da bunny is dead!!!
(> <)
(Matt. 5:28)
"But God demonstrates his own love for us in this: While we were still sinners, Christ died for us."
(Romans 5:8)
"Jesus answered, "I am the way and the truth and the life. No one comes to the Father except through me.""
(John 14:6)
A child who is allowed to be disrespectful to his parents will not have true respect for anyone.
~Billy Graham
God proved His love on the Cross. When Christ hung, and bled, and died, it was God saying to the world, "I love you."
~Billy Graham
http://www.brainyquote.com/quotes/authors/b/bil
(\_/)
(X.X) <--da bunny is dead!!!
(> <)
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allpayedatcross - Posts: 30
- Joined: Wed May 17, 2006 7:13 pm
- Location: the Kingdom of God
allpayedatcross wrote:Thanks for the compliment! I appreciate it!
Sure thing.
allpayedatcross wrote:actually it is, I kinda did that to sorta like end a chapter, it moved from Conflict to Hope.....If anyhing by my resoning they should appear with the same status.
Cool. I like that.
[SIZE="4"][color="DarkSlateBlue"]God has called me to mission work in Paraguay and Brazil. I may return to CAA someday. God bless all of you![/color][/SIZE]
[i]Two vast and trunk-less legs of stone stand in the desert. Near them, on the sand, half sunk, a shattered visage lies. Round the decay of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare the lone and level sands stretch far away. On the pedestal these words are inscribed:
“My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:
look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!â€
[i]Two vast and trunk-less legs of stone stand in the desert. Near them, on the sand, half sunk, a shattered visage lies. Round the decay of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare the lone and level sands stretch far away. On the pedestal these words are inscribed:
“My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:
look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!â€
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Anna Mae - Posts: 1663
- Joined: Fri Aug 27, 2004 5:43 am
- Location: Brazil
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