More Poetry Through The Lens of Madness

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More Poetry Through The Lens of Madness

Postby Zarn Ishtare » Sat Jun 17, 2006 6:22 am

Well, a thousand pardons for the sappy dramatic intro title, but still, My titles are the only reason I ever see any readers! So here it is, my grand debut of my spankin' new poem...WASTED TIME!


“Wasted Timeâ€
With your doubt, all is comfort
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
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Postby creed4 » Sat Jun 17, 2006 7:09 am

not bad, keep up the word
Tis No Fool to lose what he can not keep to gain what he can never lose.
What does it profit a man to gain the World yet lose his soul.
Choose Life that you Might live.
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Postby Anna Mae » Fri Jun 23, 2006 1:05 pm

Definately an interesting poem. What prompted you to write this one?
[SIZE="4"][color="DarkSlateBlue"]God has called me to mission work in Paraguay and Brazil. I may return to CAA someday. God bless all of you![/color][/SIZE]

[i]Two vast and trunk-less legs of stone stand in the desert. Near them, on the sand, half sunk, a shattered visage lies. Round the decay of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare the lone and level sands stretch far away. On the pedestal these words are inscribed:

“My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:
look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!â€
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Postby Zarn Ishtare » Fri Jun 23, 2006 8:21 pm

It's kinda self explanatory.


I WASTE ALOT OF TIME.
With your doubt, all is comfort
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
Zarn Ishtare
 
Posts: 1295
Joined: Wed Feb 11, 2004 4:23 am
Location: HELL HATH NO FURY, AT ALL.


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