The White Maiden-Song lyrics

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The White Maiden-Song lyrics

Postby Zarn Ishtare » Mon Jul 03, 2006 7:01 pm

"The White Maiden"

In the darkening lands,

In the darkening lands,

I saw the maiden...

In the darkening lands

In the darkening lands,

I saw, the maiden...

Will you wait for me...

my beloved one?

Will you wait for me

my beloved one?

*response*

I cannot wait for thee

my beloved one

I am not meant for thee

my beloved one.

In the darkening lands

In the darkening lands

The White Maiden...

Hidden by night

yet embraced by light

my beloved one...

A soul that is bright

Wrought by the fight

for my beloved....one....

I, found the maiden


I, found....The Maiden......



*end scene*
With your doubt, all is comfort
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
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Postby Anna Mae » Tue Jul 04, 2006 1:52 pm

"The White Maiden"

In the darkening lands,

In the darkening lands,

I saw the maiden...

In the darkening lands

In the darkening lands,

I saw, the maiden...

Will you wait for me...

my beloved one?

Will you wait for me

my beloved one?

*response* What?

I cannot wait for thee Why do you switch here from 'you' to 'thee'?

my beloved one

I am not meant for thee

my beloved one.

In the darkening lands

In the darkening lands

The White Maiden...

Hidden by night

yet embraced by light

my beloved one...

A soul that is bright

Wrought by the fight

for my beloved....one....

I, found the maiden


I, found....The Maiden......



*end scene*
Intriguing. I would like to hear more about this poem.
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