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Postby starstoryteller » Mon Jul 31, 2006 9:45 am

Comments please Now on with the story.

“Yeshua has come back from the Mount Olives! Now that rabble riser is in the temple court spreading his blasphemy!â€
:comp: "Foul Beast"

Jesus is the Lord of the Kings

I love hypper people :hug:

"...art can teach without at all ceasing to be art."

"Love may forgive all infirmities and love still in spite of them: but Love cannot cease to will their removal."

"If I find in myself a desire which no experience in this world can satisfy, the most probable explanation is that I was made for another world."

the words of C.S. Lewis "Jack"
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Postby Photosoph » Mon Jul 31, 2006 7:12 pm

VERY COOL! Well written, with interesting characters and I liked the pace at which you moved the story along. I enjoyed this heaps; and it's so cool to read a work of fiction based off the bible. ^_^ Great job, StarST! :jump:
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Postby starstoryteller » Tue Aug 01, 2006 11:32 am

I'm glad you liked it. I really apreashate comments
:comp: "Foul Beast"

Jesus is the Lord of the Kings

I love hypper people :hug:

"...art can teach without at all ceasing to be art."

"Love may forgive all infirmities and love still in spite of them: but Love cannot cease to will their removal."

"If I find in myself a desire which no experience in this world can satisfy, the most probable explanation is that I was made for another world."

the words of C.S. Lewis "Jack"
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Postby Photosoph » Tue Aug 01, 2006 5:27 pm

No problem. ^_^ Like I said, I really enjoyed reading this. :) THough just as a small bit of advice, there are a few spelling mistakes you could go back and fix. Other than that, everything else in the story was fine.
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