THE LABRINTH OF THE HIGH SCHOOL Intro

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THE LABRINTH OF THE HIGH SCHOOL Intro

Postby The_Marauding_Maniac » Wed Feb 11, 2004 6:07 pm

I looked glumly at my high school. My first day in there was tomorrow and I’d be, struggling, sleeping, and all around dying of boredom. I got off my bike and sat on the ground. I looked over at my best friend, Karen, who was a good athlete. She was drinking her water bottle.
“They’ve newly built that where that old guys house used to beâ€
Luke was here.
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Postby Zilch » Thu Feb 12, 2004 3:49 am

Grammar needs work, but other than that, looks okay. Keep working.
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Postby Inferno » Thu Feb 12, 2004 8:28 am

cool I like it! like Vash said the grammar needs work but over very cool keep working.:thumb:
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